A Demon Lord’s Tale: Dungeons, Monster Girls, and Heartwarming Bliss Chapter 500 Discussion

  • Thread starter MissyTi
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The story starts pretty neat but definitely looses steam later on.

The story feels Unfocused and all over the place.

It is not bad or anything but there are quite a few skippable chapters that are only there to pad out the length.

Characters of the mc's group also act more and more like him which is a really bad thing. The MC character only works as long as you have a straight man to balance him out.

Now to the romance, there are currently 4 love interests... or 6... or 8.

Why am I not sure, simple.

There are 4 girls, a slime, a vampire, a living sword and a princess.

Now the MC treats them as his daughters (or like a cute niece for the princess).

But maybe all 4 but at least two are implied to be future love interest.

The princess and the vampire.

Now, the vampire keeps drinking his blood, an absolute no go for a vampire to do with anyone but their lover.

He knows that and still lets her do it because ''she is too cute to say no.'' And she knows it as well and does sometimes casually mention that she will marry him when she is grown up (and is specifically noted to be fat sharper than she lets on)

But then the story just forgets that for a while and has them act like actual father and daughter, it is a bit strange.
 
  • #6
I love this book alot!! I laugh so hard that I cry because it is so funny!!! you did amazing!!!
 
  • #9
loved this book...easy read that grabs your attention and keeps it throughout the book!
 
  • #11
ok. this book is hot af and extremely addicting. can't wait for the update.
 
  • #12
The story line is compelling and different.  It keeps you wanting more...and the characters are very well thought out and I am enjoying the different little twists that keep popping up!  Where is the rest of it??!!!  I’m dying to read more!?
 
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