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The overall pace of the novel is good, and in my personal opinion it is not cringe but I feel the MC needs to be smart, he needs to train and increase his stats, but he just gains more and more skills, and to the author I would suggest showing the status screen little more so the readers can keep up with the progress

This novel has everything a great story should have. A rich story building, complex characters with their own qualities and flaws, making them relatable, mysteries that will make you want more and all of that is backed with impressive writing skills. If you are someone who doesn't mind a slow burn and is searching for all the qualities I mentioned, then I strongly recommend this one! 🤓

i believe this will be a masterpiece because I have put a lot of work into it. I hope you like it too🤧🤧♥️ love ya'all.

it's alright, somewhat contrived with character writing that just runs me the wrong way, I tried to like it but i couldn't

Ok here’s my review: Prologue is amazing! So so cool! And then the vibe between the characters is the sweetest brotherhood vibe. I love that. I can see this being a very exciting book! I can sit and listen to this one which is great.

this has an intriguing storyline. it's concept is kind of compelling and attractive to me.the characters were well written. they depict emotional depth and so on.I recommend this story

this should be a great book to read from you! keep up the good work!

I like it so far. I think it'll get interesting and intense pretty quickly, and I kinda like how unique the system is.  I really recommend you read this.

I'm enjoying this book so far and i got to say, it has a lot of potential

I love everything so far about the story I like how the author choose words well and how each of his characters are when reading is like I’m interacting with the story itself.

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