Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

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please upload more chapters i love this man please speedup

Greetings! I really liked the premise of this novel, and I think it would improve much more if a grammar checker is used in helping in the editing part. All in all, everything is good.

it's fantastic, I literally binged all the current chapters in one sitting and I'm pretty sure this book is going to cause me some financial problems. Will most likely be selling a kidney to the author for bonus chapters 10/10

So far love everything about the novel if it keeps going like that i might make this my favorite leaving my reveiw............. ........... Hope you don't drop this novel author

I love the book it’s just that it doesn’t make sense how both her sons try to control and involve themselves in their mother’s romance life. Also they’re a bit too clingy aren’t they

5 stars, because it's my book. The theme of Extra may sound like every other book but the difference will be known the moment you read it.

Story looks promising hoping Mc will unite india under one banner and make a empire with colonies very excited for future chapters

I have been enjoying the story and interaction with the author immensely so far! Baldwin is an incredibly interesting part of the story that I guarantee will leave you wanting more chapter by chapter. The world-building really take the lead though, although the characters are nothing to overlook. Baldwin, the Demon King was unique in that he pursued peace, he was distinct in his wisdom and ability to defy expectations. I highly suggest giving this a read.

Impressive book, the system is interesting and quite easy to follow. Already in my library 😁

some might not like the slow pacing but i love it, shows us the progression properly