Evolution from Carp to Divine Dragon Chapter 109 Discussion

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  • #1
Really enjoying the story, managed to binge 100+ chapters in one go.

The translation quality is great so far, I haven’t noticed any obvious errors or awkward phrasing.

The pacing feels good, with progression being made in the MCs system every few chapters.

So far, none of the big fights felt like they were dragged on for too long, even when done over multiple chapters.

The MC has been unreasonably lucky in the actions taken by random 3rd parties, but those peoples motivations are explained well and are believable, so it doesn’t feel forced.

The slow apocalypse setting is interesting, it feels like we will actually get an answer as to why this is happening unlike most apocalypse stories I have read, although from what we have seen so far it doesn’t seem to make sense that it is happening gradually instead of all at once.

Have not seen too much of the MCs personality so far, but he has expressed concern for his parents, and his girlfriend from before his death is introduced early on in the story, so presumably at some point he will be able to communicate with people and we will get to see more of who he is.
 
  • #4
what a wonderful twist and turns for them but sure you'll laugh,cry and love..pls do read guys..
 
  • #5
loved it, is there a second part? I want to know what happens with karmina
 
  • #6
16 chapters per day for more than half year to 1 chapter per day for the last month
 
  • #7
when this Stupid book finish?? Now Corrine story is finished so they STARTED ANOTHER STORY in the same novel????? How Clever!!! Start Lucas story in another NOVEL
 
  • #10
so when is going to add to this story. or write a new book to continue with their story a little more like children and other stuff it would be a lot better...
 
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