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Good emotions. I have been single for the last 14 years, and I don't care much about my past love life and old scars. But your writing made me remember my old wound when I broke up with my ex-girlfriend. I felt the same when I saw her walking with her new boyfriend who was our mutual friend. Good work. Keep writing
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Hi☺️it's the author again! I just came to remind all my wonderful readers who have taken their to read this novel. Thank you and I love you all, also this is slow burn romance you need to take your time and have patience to enjoy it as it is my fantasy ☺️happy reading.
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The story is well fleshed out. Our Mc strives to grow with each chapter. His personality is likeable(at least to me). The pacing is wonderful. The side characters' personalities and goals are well portrayed. Interaction between characters and their world is immersive. Minor to no grammar mistakes. Update stability is consistent without the loss in captivity of the reader. The author has a wonderful way of keeping the reader wanting more, from the storytelling to the cliffhangers and the various questions left unanswered. I hope the mc keeps on becoming even more overpowered, and he finds more meaning in life. Overall, a 10/10 mythos genre. Author, keep up the good work.
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A very good novel. I was impressed by how the events unfolded and the smooth flow of the storyline. The dialogues are well-written, and although the descriptions are somewhat weak, they don't detract from the overall reading experience.
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I like the naruto elements in the story, you could even include the tailed beast modes later in the story.Also maybe a little hint on what is ahead since it s too safe right now.Keep up the good work !
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Shameless author here to say it’s worth the read.
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your work reminds me with clasic story and refreshing my mind from lot of golden finger system novel
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Good story, but I feel like the tech level of the world is all around the place, the mc introduce industrialization in his territory then you have the time skip and i feel like the world tech was forcefully pushed forward to give the mc some challenge, some index or chapter dedicated to explain the world at large would be good.
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Not really a fan of this genre but the novel has great potential, will surely stick around🤗🤗
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I just finished posted The Silent Game, and it absolutely deserves 5 stars! The suspense, the twists, the complex characters—everything about this book pulled me in from the very first chapter. Elise's journey is captivating, and Nicholas is one of the most intriguing characters I've come across. The way their story is unfolding is so intense, and I find myself eagerly waiting for each new update.If you’re someone who loves psychological thrillers, this book is a must-read! It’s unpredictable, gripping, and has just the right amount of tension to keep you hooked. I also highly recommend reading Symphony of Shadows—it's just as incredible!Please, don’t just take my word for it—leave your thoughts in the comments! Let’s all talk about these twists and how this story has us on the edge of our seats!
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Progress is far too quick and inconsistent. Also, it's very clear the author isn't familiar with anything engineering related considering the quantities of products and time-frames of construction.
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WRITING QUALITY: 5/5The grammar is really good. The way that this was written was so easy to understand. No unnecessary expositions. Straight to the point just like how I like it. STABILITY OF UPDATES: 4/5It's still too early to judge but I am giving 4/5 because I checked the table of contents and found that the first chap was uploaded a month ago while there are only 13 chaps. I'm not complaining because at the end of the day, I'd still prefer to read the book that updates only once a week but well-written than the other way around. (But I still prefer a well-written daily update.)STORY DEVELOPMENT: 5/5No need to say anything. Read the first chapter and you'll know. CHARACTER DESIGN: 5/5They have their own accent, baby! Need I say more? The interactions between characters are believable. Not cardboard cut outs.WORLD BACKGROUND: 5/5I can visualize the place as I read. And there are no unnecessary expositions. PS. It was good but I just wished the paragraphs were a tad shorter though you can ignore this one. I just prefer shorter paragraphs. That's why.
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