The Healer Demands Payment! Chapter 134 Discussion

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  • #1
Superb worldbuilding and strong plot, but the character development is quite bad.

The side characters are basically sheeps who can't think on their own. This is extremely visible especially in the earlier chapters. And even up until 100+ chapters, most of what the side characters do don't even make sense. They're just like those sidekicks whose purpose and actions are only centered along the MC in superhero novels. MC is a total mary sue, which is funny considering how bad she was treated in her previous life. Overall the characters are very 2D and non-humanlike.

But the plot though, it's really good that it takes away all those lacking elements. If you're a fan of xianxia, you'd love this. The intricate fantasy setting alongside with adventure-like arcs is the main focus of this novel. And the worldbuilding is just plainly amazing. Seriously, this is one of the few xianxia novels that has minimal plotholes with intricate worldbuilding elements.

The one thing that's bothering me is how the author struggled with writing technique. Xianxia novels are never easy to follow since it usually have a fantasy world setting, but here the author didn't give enough explanations for some key elements that'd make the readers confused. The writing is a bit hard to follow because of those unexplored ideas that kept jumping around.

You want some romance? Meh, don't expect much of it.
 
  • #2
Excellent!   I am totally into Aria's  life and situation.  And I was left wanting  more, more , more!   Great writing!
 
  • #3
Amazing ... ... Wonderful Story ... ... ...️  Thank You For Sharing It ... ...️...️...️
 
  • #4
I still hate Luciano for how he beats her but hey, It is dark romance and was written as such. reason for 4 stars is because it needs editing.No offence lovely author.
 
  • #5
Dear Keira, Stop being pathetic. I pity you much. You need to move on & find yourself a man that truly see your worth
 
  • #6
Why is it marked complete ?  author , Can you please give us the whole story?
 
  • #7
soooo good, I never comment on books but this was so well written. Amazing work
 
  • #9
although I have sworn this book off I still stupidly keep checking back. I only read the last chapter posted to see if the story is progressing. it's not. just another bad guy after Piper, as always. this story has lost its plot entirely. Shocker ...
 
  • #11
great reading need to update chapters sooner so we can keep rradi.g
 
  • #13
so glad it worked out well in theend esp 4 Melissa ... enjoyed yhis ... thanku
 
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