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This isn't very good. It's not terrible, either.I won't continue it because it has one of my biggest pet peeves: idiot MC. One example: he creates a forbidden technique that uses his lifespan to damage opponents... The kicker? Too many of his attacks are just explosions without any finesse, so his forbidden, life-saving technique will also kill him and it's incredibly inefficient.Likewise, he keeps telling himself that he likes safety... in reality, he's a coward. I appreciate safety-focused MCs. However, they know when to act to defend that safety. The MC does not. He'll be under siege and still hold back, nevermind that he let an opponent who he could beat get away after having seen some of his valuable trump cards.He will tell himself, oh, "I should do this thing for my safety, " and then waste a year gardening, instead of working on bettering his formation or creating a movement technique, which thrice has proved necessary up to where I read. Or he will tell himself that he's a defense fanatic... but it's been 75 chapters and still no water bear Gu. Instead, he relies on fate to plop some tardigrades in his lap. He is almost a puppet to his luck, which I abhore.Basically, this is an okay brainless read, but don't expect anything great.
