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Uh... I'm still reading it but it's kinda aggravating? I read it just as a placeholder.Anyways, this might trigger ppl who like this but in my opinion, the MC doesn't have a real personality.When I say that, I mean it is not consistent to what we know about him. First, we know nothing about his personality prior to entering the book except that he was a pretty good police officer. Second, so other than acting dumb sometimes to act young, in his unconscious moments too, why does he still act like a naive teenager when internally he's not a teenager and was a police officer.To some degree, I'm just whatever it's ok I'm not too bothered with the fact it feels like he's not written well and he's naive (someone who is also so touchy??) and an inconsistent character. I just read it for the mystery I guess.But then Spoiler
ok so the ML is annoyed he didn't tell important information to him, the boss of the organization and instead told his brother. Yes he forgot. But he's also supposed to be someone who was a police officer, supposedly a good one even maybe which is why the gold finger wanted him. So you tell me police officers don't remember to report information that's important to their squad or leader bc they don't write reports every day after a mission. Like that's what they do. So...
[collapse] now somehow bc he is in a teenager's body, his intelligence and experience as a previous police officer is just like gone except for all of his physical skills?Yea that's bad character writing. I know y'all love this and maybe you think I'm wrong but... What. Hello. It's fiction but good writing f*cking makes sense... I mean it's a good imo 2 star reading to spend your time. Also helps that the translations are bomb.By Ch45:Man ngl the mystery is the only thing pushing me along bc the MC character writing is so inconsistent.For example by now: "In the past, Shi Jin would never dare to act so casually I'm front of the ML, let alone manage him".... LIKE HOMIE. writer? Do you think us readers are as dumb as the MC? Do you think we don't remember him DEMANDING the ML to do as he says and drink soup within a month of knowing him? Is that not managing? You cant say one thing and think it makes sense just because you said it. Wtf. Am I the only one hello??Ch 54:Ok everything makes sense now. He's actually supposed to be a dumb police officer, although idk how an adult lived so long acting like a bonefide child but I guess that's why he died and ended up in this book.Basically if you can't stand "s*upid I'm jesus I'm the only savior and sacrificer" MCs, then well it'll be a cringy ride. However, the world building and mystery are really amazing. So I can only recommend this for that. I'm honestly barely holding on but sigh it's sad the MC is so dumb. The fact is he is dumb for plot and "romance" (idk about this romance imo like i'd never choose the MC personally) progression --- imo it's very obvious.
