- #1
This story is well written and the translator keeps it that way. It feels so natural that it like the story was originally written in English. Can't compliment the translator enough ~blows oodles of kisses~ take my germs, just take em!!!Anyway, I love the plot. The author does a good job of balancing the system with the main character and the world. Sometimes the system is over used (too much spotlight/words dedicated to it) but that is not the case in this story. The system's personality is refreshing, it acts like a BL fan women so its very easy for me to place myself in "her" shoes. I just love her "greasy nest" talk, makes no sense whatsoever but it has grown on me like no ones business, so much so I have to stop myself from saying it in real life and confusing people horribly... So instead I just think to myself when I see cute couple "what a cute greasy love nest"... Anyway hopefully the systems grows on you like it did with me. The golden finger the system provides is not too OP in case anyone was wondering. "It" just basically gives buffs, not actual powers that are kept basically, and the powers aren't always the most helpful which makes for funny moments.This story made me cry at one point but for the most part its just laughs. The MC is just too lovable and you can understand exactly why the ML is falling for him. The MC acts like a puppy (but is not the dog, if you know what I'm saying...). Now about the ML, he doesn't start out as too awe inspiring (which I actually appreciate) as he is wheelchair bound but as the story progresses you are made to look past that. The author does a very good job of contentiously bringing it into the story but without rubbing it in your face, just like if you had a friend that was wheelchair bound you wouldn't just be thinking about it all the time while in their company, the author does a good job making the wheelchair feel "normal" as in its in your everyday life (I almost wonder if the author has personal experience with how well they talk about it). Part of the love that you get toward the ML is from slowly learning about him so I wont write anything else on his personality.So in a nutshell, translations are excellent, story is excellent, characters are excellent, so its all pretty much excellent. I really wish the rating was higher but I could see some instant gratification teens not liking this and maybe that's why its not 4.9 or 5 like I think it deserves. Not enough OPness, fast burning love, enough love interest, or whatever it is the kids like these days.
