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TwistedTsunami
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Hey š great author, I want to share you some tips on how to grow your book performance, along with making fantastic book covers and I will also use line art to make animated animations let me know if u are interested so talk discuss better??
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Author: This book isn't a perfect 5 star but since.. i am the author, so you know? I need to be 'kind' to myself.Note: If you enjoyed works like LOTM and RI as well as popular transmigration novels then I am pretty sure you'll enjoy this book of mine.What To Expect: A protagonist who is calm and manipulative however he isn't someone like Fang Yuan who is purely emotionless. No, the main character has emotions and I try my best to make him feel humane while still keeping his image as a 'monster'.The storyline starts off a bit normal but trust me as it progresses it's gonna become more and more engaging and interesting, Uh and it isn't in the tags but there will be romance though not heavy but very light, don't worry I won't spoil the mc's image and will balance it all perfectly.The writing is the best I can provide at the moment, I am a writer who hardly has 3 weeks worth of writing experience so expect a bit of writing issues though I promise the writing will get better as new chapters arrive.TL"DR: A story with philosophical spice as well as a good plot, best for people who are looking for something that keeps them hooked with the plot.The novel has only started yet and so has my journey as an author.
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love your novel š please don't slack on updating
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Potential! I must say, it is exciting diving into the world. While it's not without flaws, the potential of the plot and promise on display are certainly good.Writing - Needs improvement. A lot. But it's readable, understable and sufficient. Still, if the author can improve the writing by a level or two, it will be amazing. Tip- Focus on some realistic reactions from characters, situations and such. Plot- Since there isn't much of plot given till now, I have considered it's potential. If The author plays it right, the plot can become a great piece among 'system' contents.Character - Dialogues! they make or break the characters and it is good to see, character have plenty interaction. Well done there. Just needs some refinement.World Building- Although not unique in its genre with systems, ranks, monsters, etc. I could understand the world quite a lot from the first 15 chapters. So, I would say it was done great. Well, there is more to explore in future, so I belive again in it's potential.Overall, it is a good story. Needs editing and refinements, but still enjoyable.
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.hehehe kidding ;> read this, this one is the future bestseller of wn hehehe ;pp
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Hereās the Devil x Godās author giving his masterpiece a 5 āļørating. I hope you guys enjoy this novel as much I enjoy writing it.
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I admire how the story of Dr Ethan and Emily is unfolding with such intrigue, and I'm eager to discover the journeys of their love lives and how they triumphed over life's challenges. Well done, author!
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All the original readers can read it I tried to make as perfect as possible
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Review for fo. Not sure this is related to apocalypse month though
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Love the book especially the female character. Iām just waiting for the next chapter. It been 13 days since they updated. Please send more.
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MC is mad that the game's protagonist gets distracted by women --> Gets transmigrated --> Immediately gets distracted by and led on by his own maid
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1. The name Julien feels a bit strange to me, and it's inconvenient to read (Iām reading through a browser with Google Translate translating the novel into my native language since the app translates incredibly poorly and sometimes deletes paragraphs of text during translation. After translation, the name looks like a hard-to-pronounce French name). I hope the character is called something else later on; itās not a big problem, just an inconvenience. 2. A damn cliffhanger in chapter 4āmoments like these are why I leave novels until at least 100 chapters have accumulated. 3. So far, I like the plot, especially the fact that he didnāt pretend to be that womanās son from the start. Thatās a huge plus. 4. Iām one of those who read "VSOL" up to the ongoing chapters, and I enjoyed it. Iām waiting for the continuation, and Iām really glad the author isnāt abandoning that novel to start this one.
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