Very good novel, I find the concept interesting. However, it seems strange that no one becomes suspicious after winning every bet and generating over 300 million pounds.The only downside is the number of chapters—I started reading without checking the count, and when I finished, I thought, "Where are my other 300 chapters?"

Your writing is really neat, and the storyline is really easy to understand, very good, so far this story also has quite a strong appeal, it's quite interesting. Keep fighting!

For a beginning author, it's a great novel. I like how Eris started - as a jealous overlooked teen who just wants power to fit in. As time continued, it feels like she's beginning to grow up a bit. Anyway, it's still at chapter 29,so I love the novel and how it is for now.

I'll give this a 5 star, cause why not? After all, this is the 1st novel of my best friend. I'm pretty sure it is going to be an unique and intriguing novel. If it is not, then you're dead...

okey ...like this is very bad... it feels like every third paragraph is missing with some information the story is developing very fast, again smt to do with the missing info

"BioCores" offers a fresh take on the post-apocalyptic genre. The world-building is detailed and imaginative, and the concept of the BioCores is intriguing.  Nioh is a compelling protagonist, and his unique abilities offer a different perspective on the struggles of this world.  I also love the detailled Weapon designing.While the story can be a bit dense at times, it's a worthwhile read for fans of science fiction who are looking for something a bit different.  I'm curious to see where the story goes from here.

So far your writing is pretty good, but I can't get the hang of having to be big in the early chapters, it feels a bit boring, and d and at the beginning I didn't know which way this story would go, but the mystery is quite fascinating. Keep up the spirit!

Author Review!What can be expected in the story of Achilles?-Overpowered MC-Medium pacing of progression-No harem-A vast world filled with unique characters and systems of power -Blood-pumping battles and stories that will have you reading the chapter again just to relive it-Enjoy the ride!

Aiden's journey to an exciting new level, blending intrigue with intense character development. As Aiden delves deeper into the Code Guild, his growing powers and the mysterious book he’s connected to slowly start making sense, revealing his role as a Code Conduit. The introduction of Master Lin as a mentor, the hints at the dangerous Nullifiers, and the arrival of Maya, who shares a unique connection to the code, build a strong foundation for what’s to come. The mix of thrilling world-building, Aiden’s intense training, and the revelation of the Etheric Assembly sets the stage for even greater challenges and discoveries ahead, leaving readers eagerly anticipating the next chapter.

Hey there, Grim Guy here. I'd take a moment here to talk about this book and give you a few things to chew on before diving in.1. Being an "Extra" is cool and all, but that's just the tip of the iceberg. Yes, the story revolves around that concept, but my goal is deeper than that—check out point number two for the details.2. So welcome to some potentially peak world-building. We’ve got the classic weak-to-strong vibes, a whole bunch of mysteries to cover, and yeah, there might be some bleak arcs. But hey, look at the title: Omnitemporal Convergence. It’s not about handing out free plot armor or sprinkling deus ex machina everywhere. It's more about those moments where you'd “wish” they existed (it’s lighthearted, don’t worry).3. And meet our MC: proactive, a little psycho (fuck off edgy), and very into making sense of things (and money). He’s grounded, strategic, and maybe a tad bit unconventional.4. Harem? Look, I’m not a big fan on the way most harems are written—the delivery of the characters and all that jazz. That said, the MC’s time-based skill opens up interesting possibilities. Basically, yeah, it will be a harem.5. My "Extra" credentials are basic at best. The only Extra-themed novel I’ve read to 200+ chapters was An Extra’s Novel, and honestly, I mostly stuck with it for the wish-fulfillment vibes. I’ve dabbled in a few others (Path of Extra, Extra’s Descent, Extra’s Death, etc.), but never got very far. I’m coming into this with a general understanding of the “Extra” trope—background characters, second-rate villains, all that—but, of course, I’m writing it my way.Oh, and I once read a short manga about transmigrating as a second-rate villain. Didn’t love it, but it gave me some ideas for the early set-up. Think wish-fulfillment with its brain switched on.So yeah, buckle up. It’s gonna be a ride.

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Hey dear author Your book resonated deeply with me, and I'm convinced it can inspire many more readers. I'd love to share some ideas on how to expand its reach and amplify its impact.May I have the privilege of discussing my thoughts with you?