I Became The Villain The Hero Is Obsessed With Chapter 40-321 Discussion

  • Thread starter Puja chetry
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  • #1
I really like this one, characters are not bad, connection of the characters are really nice (altough few), author made the MC both entartaining to read and depraved enough to have that kind of mindset without making anything disturbing to read. There is just 2 problems that stops me from giving a 5

1airheaded MC that fails to see upcoming obvious tragedies (nothing that dramatic right now but signs keep showing)

2streaming service comments (altough they are not bad, author keeps on talking about how the distorted the people live because of the events that keep happening and uses it to justify comments being only chaotic and making them one sided. And the laughing effects which all of the comments have are really annoying)

edit: this needs an edit as of 320+

so after initial stage author basically filtered the story to the point of a retcon, stopped writing anything that develops the story, nothing about the side characters (after they got recruited) and found a excuse for them to be no different than an item after 250 chapters and that made it so whole story was just repeating what he did in earlier in said 250 chapters on a bit different scale again and again. I guess author got bored to death himself so it is nearing the end now, but what is done is done.

I had my fun from this novel, but rather than a story it was a fun 10 minute braindead fun every week

because of the nisekoi treatment, I will lower this to 2 from 4 and I dont reccomend you guys to read this (just realized cant change score :/)
 
  • #5
normally I prefer happy ending but for this story I don't know what should I say...I want to see tapish as much as possible but, at the same time I also want them together....oh my absurd mind......
 
  • #8
Captivating Story, beautifully written, phenomenal characters, beautiful Love story!!!  All of Muse's books are must reads!! Will have you enthralled from start to finish!!! I Love all of your books & I've purchased them in Paperback & have re read them multiple times. ♡♡
 
  • #9
Every girl is priceless at kinikilig ako sa bawat banat ni Gresso kay Yrah lalo na ang pagtawag niya ng sweetcakes. Ang gandang pakinggan kung si Gresso lang ang magsasabi. Please Fafi, call me sweetcakes too. Charot.
 
  • #10
Hi author can u please do a proper happy ending for sylvia and odell then after that continue the story  of john and sherry…thanks
 
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