I’ve decided to review this novel even though it’s new and has only two chapters. The storyline got me hooked.Talking about the storyline, it’s quite unique and complicated as it states. The author has described every single detail which makes it easier for the readers to imagine and have an idea of the background setting. You have a excellent imagination, I can say that. Coming to the grammar, there are a few grammatical errors in the chapters, it’s not that it cannot be edited. The sentence structure is fine. Overall, the usage of words is good and is perfect for one to imagine the scenes clearly. The more you write, the more you learn! :) I cannot judge the stability of updates as I think the author must be busy plotting the storyline first. I will vote every time the author posts a chapter! >.>Putting aside the official judgement, I personally love this book. I would recommend this to have a read of this book. It’s complicated and amazing >.>Happy writing!More chapters please~

The author Lord Streak has incredible work ethic. His prior work Martial Unity is amazing and exciting. You'll likely find a 3 chapter release everyday like has done with Martial Unity.The premise of this novel is in an entirely different direction than his previous novel but I love the ability of Lord Streak to science the shit out off stuff. I hope for a science based magic system. I'm am excited as well for close combat magic battles.

I just finished this in one day! I'm already waiting for new chapters. I can confidently say this novel is a hidden gem—I highly recommend it!

This is a good read. It has a good build up in the storyline and the author does well in drawing you in whether it's fights or character build up. I enjoy Nioh as the mc. He is strong willed and strong minded. He is smart and ambitious as well. The world background is well done and very original. Overall I think it's a good read and I wish there were more chapters

A real good romance with a touch of simplicity in it. I commend on the reader for her great development.  It is a nice book to read.

Though it's just getting started, this new novel shows a lot of promise to me. The world-building is intriguing, with hints of a rich, magical world and mysterious forces at play. The protagonist is relatable, and there’s potential for some great character development as the story progresses. The plot is off to a strong start, with enough action and suspense to keep you interested. The writing is clear and engaging, and the pacing feels just right for a beginning. I’m excited to see where this story goes.... it has all the makings of an epic fantasy adventure! Definitely one to watch. Giving all-stars to encourage the writer.

I believe this one has a lot potential.Hope to see more.Continue on,Author!

Intriguing start and a nice reference with Beatrix *Wink* What stands out? The mc! Good job on the char dev and I'm honestly curious to see how he'll evolve. It's a nice book. I hope you'll win this WSA Homie. :)

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These types of books are always worth the time,loved reading it. Waiting for more chapters of this.

One of the best novel on this platform without question.But for new readers, I want to make a organisation for putting seles at her place. ahh truly how much I hate her, she's too annoying  and anybody who likes her is a true sadist ig.

The first ten chapters are filled with thrill, excitement and mystery. I wanted to know who was the one helping her to survive! And I love how you portrayed the children's characters. Add more chapters, authornim!!