I Became a Genius Swordsman in the Pretty Girl Game Chapter 116 Discussion

  • #1
This story is unique, if you want a novel that manages to implement a "gender-bent world" masterfully, try it, no need to read this review further.

Now some points to discuss.

This novel has 2, 5 problems with me.

The first one is character development. It's there, definitely, it's quite pleasant to follow some girls' storylines. Unfortunately, at times it feels somewhat awkward, forced dare I say. If you choose to ignore it, not a big issue.

Then (although it's not really about the novel itself but about my reading experience) there is an annoyance that comes in the image of ads. It is impossible to read. While the translation became top tier with the addition of post editing, the ads make me unable to read on the official website. I understand that TL studio needs revenue, but the ads made me stop reading at their site before even considering to support them. And anyone capable and willing, I recommend supporting them so that others won't have to deal with that sin against humanity.

Lastly theres personal taste. That's why it's only half a point. I despise bad harem, it's not bad in this one, but it can crumble at any point.

And there's our MC... He's clishe. While there's nothing inherently bad with that, his behaviour does not strike as unique, but instead predictable. But there's saving grace posed as great world building and unique writing style.

Overall, great read so far (misunderstandings aside).

9/10
 
  • #4
Lydia should not try to meddle in the affairs of her boss and should not be giving information out about what goes on in the office. Jia should trust Atlas and talk to him about her fears.
 
  • #5
I loved this book, it’s an interesting spin on the underworld and gods/goddesses. I can’t wait to read the sequel. The only issue is you jump around at first into dreams and flashbacks with no transition so it gets confusing sometimes. It wasn’t enough to make me put the book down though.
 
  • #7
Loved this book! Am hooked! Definitely moving on to book 2! Great work author!
 
  • #11
Wow...just wow. This is amazing and it takes my mind as if I were there in the book. The character being me.
 
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