- #1
It's nicely written and the translation is great. However, the development seems to be lacking.Spoiler
MC has a repetitive mission of claiming the heart of the ML of each world. The system is a useless comedic plot tool that has a bantering relationship with MC. If MC or the system shows some sort of development, one of them would take a jab at the other and then the growth is immediately discarded. They're just making each other useless.
The ML has more growth than the MC and system. The development is horrible and traumatizing, it seems like it'll lead to a horribly possessive ML in MC's main world.
Then there's the system. It's just there. There's not much power to it. It spends MC's life point on food. MC worked hard, system cuts of her progress.
She needs a better system.
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