- #1
I love the premise. Everyone has a planet which they have to build up with their own power and compete with each other. However, there are some glaring flaws in the execution. First and foremost; the MC lets the planet develop on its own ("without intervention") because it would be better for the planet, yet from the moment he lets go, the continent is embroiled in war with a stagnation of technology, the opposite of what he should have wanted. This is so the author can make some "interesting" story lines inside the planet itself. Yet the these fail to interest me at all. Another thing is that the real world feels so damn lacking. The MC has no attachments whatsoever, and every challenge he overcomes easily even though he seems to always be the underdog. It's so sad, I was really excited the first like 50 chaps, these were actually decent and I looked forward to the story, but from there it went downhill imo.