- #1
It starts off great imo, like many others reviewers have said, if you like a dark story the first part is great, later on you need to be a major fan of harems to enjoy it, which I'm not... Can handle it as long as it's not "too extra" and the story keeps it up. But the harem... Too extra... I mean...Spoiler
The Vampire... sure! The bunny... ok, the masochist dragon... fine... sigh, the little kid and her mother... seriously?! The most popular girl in class... kind of saw it coming aka fine, the teacher... again, seriously?! The friend of the popular girl... do we have to? *glances towards all the other guys in class who have started to take the form of sheep even though, normally they should be perfectly functioning human beings* guess the ability to destroy a mountain is all that matters, availability and shown interest doesn't matter... I know it's a harem, but still...
[collapse]Tbh, I still enjoy the "main story", it's just drowning in random and unexplainable fluff accompanied by teeth grinding in the background. The support cast aside from the harem are rather terribly written, not that the harem is mind blowingly deep either.The main story as a whole is decent, and the idea and world building isn't bad. It's a shame everyone aside from the MC is either a harem member, an idiot, an a**hole, an enemy, or any of those combinations.Later on the story picks up again, things go more serious with some actually serious developement. As I'm on a personal hiatus I can't say anything about the rest. Will probably give it another go one day when I'm bored and in the right mood for this...Do keep in mind anyone wanting to read this will need to google for some chapters since the homepage for ElementalCobalt is gone and with that, the links to those chapters here.
