Cannon fodder Cheating System (BL)

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Or: Cannon fodder's Cheat System
Title: 炮灰作弊系统[快穿]
Links: https://www.sto.cc/book-169699-1.html
http://www.danmeila.com/chongsheng/31153.html

Summary:
Since the beginning, as he got to know that he had to go different sequence worlds and slip into different cannon fodders' bodies, his heart was against it. Because as the villain, you only have a short period of time where you can live very comfortably, and the ending of the cannon fodder is usually the opposite as one can imagine.
But the person who gave him this system told him, this system possesses every kind of powerful function that can help him turn the cannon fodders' lives around. Every time he finishes a world satisfactorily, he can be more likely to ascend to godhood.
He lived through more than thousands of reincarnations, but has yet to be a god. Sounds quite interesting. Then let's try this.
From that moment on he began his path of acting like a tyrant and oppressing people. Once began, there is no way back. Oh, and also passingly tearing up the so-called White Moonlights and righteous people's fake masks.
His goal: wearing the villain's appearance and go on other people's righteous paths, while leaving these people with nowhere to go.

Tags: 1v1, veeeeeryyy big golden finger, MC=shou
novel finished, around 200 chapters

NOTES: okay, the last part "acting like a tyrant and oppressing people" is so no true, lol. just a way of saying "face-slapping other people" imo

ok, so fair WARNING to you guys, i found some inconsistencies between the two websites that i linked. on danmeila, i don't know why, but during the first arc the name of the restaurant always had a different name and some people's names got changed or added some characters that shouldn't be there. since i know that many people use mtl and not read it raw like i do, they might get veeeery confused and frustrated. i did, too, until i just ignored some names. interestingly enough, these strange changes weren't there at the beginning, but right in the middle of the story... (maybe coding problem??)
also, the MC's name is different on these two websites: on danmeila it's "ZD" (yeah, don't know why it's like that), on sto.cc it's "Jing Yang"
also, in arc 2, some people's names got confused, suddenly the villain's name of arc 2 was desribed as the villain of arc 1 (but that was only 1 time so far) and the conversation (who said what) was also one time switched around. although these two minor things aren't that confusing, but still.

also, many many TYPOS! i guess the author is a fast writer and doesn't check (carefully enough) after finishing writing. which for people reading raw can kind of spot it right on the go (since the characters have the same sounds), but for mtlers it would be difficult. while the whole plot of the story doesn't change bc of this and mtlers can still understand it when they are warned beforehand (like i am warning you now), it's still a big MINUS POINT in execution from the author in my opinion.
this is so far the first novel that i've found so many mistakes in, it's a bit sad since the two arcs that i've read are quite nice and from a different point of view than normal fast wears.

arc 1 is modern world, so normally it's about business management, actors, entertainment, etc. but in this novel it's about a son of a rich family that has a long history of being amazing cooks! COOKS! wow, first time ever in a fast wear.
arc 2 is ancient world, so one normally imagines veeeery old with emperors, concubines, palace plots, etc. but no, it's in a time where it's still old but new enough to have guns. it's during the time when Opium was first introduced to China and many got addicted to it. MC is again a son from a rich business merchant family that has to find a way to save his business. also, half-bastard-brother trying to ruin him, but they are also focusing on the Beijing Opera where they act and sing and dance.
i also liked how mc and ml interacted with each other (some parts, even though not detailed, were kind of steamy *blush*) and the prolgue was quite good imo. there is suspence and mc doesn't know why he is in this situation and he even wanted to give up and was ready to have his sould ripped apart just to stop this endless circle or reincarnations. but apparently someone out there, beyond the "99 days" that is still waiting patiently for him. one can imagine how the ending will be, but still curious how MC got into this situation.

So a big plus for new takes on the usual worlds, but a big minus for all the typos and mistakes (and really, i am a slightly above novice-level reader that can spot some mistakes, but beginners and mtlers will (maybe?) have a hard time >.< )
i would suggest you using the sto.cc website for reading since there are fewer mistakes in it (and the mc's name is called Jing Yang there and not some weird shit like ZD, the heck >.>)

i am now reading arc 3, so i am also waiting for some spoilers if someone has read it already

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Can someone please do summary of the arcs please. 
 
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This is SAO-esque story.. There might be many inaccuracy, bc it’s similar with XianXia world, and I’m weak on XianXia..
MC wake up in pain & feel dizzy, he saw a group of people fighting monster, an extremely handsome man suddenly turned to look at him, MC can see ridicule & disdain in his eyes, MC think such person didn’t deserve such a face. MC observe the fight & guessing this is a fantasy world, the defeated monster scattered like glass fragment & drop a lot of items, seeing people take items & put them in air then disappear, MC guessing those items is stored in the storage space. MC currently doesn’t know if he’s teaming with these people & stood still. A handsome blond guy calls him & asks if he’s alright after being hit. MC cautiously reviews a bit of original memory, the man called Zuo YanMing, real name Zhao Chao. MC didn’t understand why game name is in front of real name, he need to find the time to reviews all the original memory. MC observe the people appearances all gorgeous, but have the feel of a mannequin, he pinch himself & fell his body is normal. They arrived at a two-storey house with large yard, but strangely no other houses are around. The other handsome man is ridiculing MC, tell him he is so weak, if he were MC, he won’t have face to live at all; MC is simply a waste of opportunities for others to live. MC intuition tells him this man is deliberately provoking him, but bc he still didn’t understand anything, he go to his room to review everything. This is an advanced world, people no longer use screen & mouse, but game cabin to completely experience real game world, the original called Ding NuoYang, a rich young master, after graduating he brilliantly make his family business more successful. This world approves same-sex marriage, his parent told him no mater man or woman, DNY partner must be decent person. His classmate, ZC has been chasing him from the start of university. DNY didn’t have any feeling towards him, but ZC keep chasing him for 7-8 years, so DNY finally accept him. They decided to take their relationship slow, ZC is very happy, ZC is a professional gamer, he is pretty famous & have decent earning, not as successful as DNY tho. DNY decided to try gaming too bc he want to have a common topic, ZC is ecstatic, but bc he & his team is a professional gamer, he can only spare a little time to accompany DNY to teach him basic gameplay. Many people know ZC bc he is very famous & seeing him with novice DNY, they know they are lovers, so many people make fun of them. At this time, the game experiencing some trouble, the players can’t log out, many players dead bc the game companies poorly handles this incident, finally they success in establishing 100 exit, however, there are more than tens of thousands player trapped. They temporary hook players to life support & decided to clear the previous ranking & let players get points, the top 100 have the chance to escape the game. DNY join ZC team & provide money, bc he thinks as long as they can survive, money doesn’t matter, but ZC team is greedy & take DNY for granted, often let him injured & insult him, one man attitude just like trying to dive him out, he is the handsome man, Zuo GongZi Jian (Jane for short). Jane game profession is the rare & difficult refining division; he can create & increase the value of weapons, also increasing player’s energy. Jane has played the game for 10 years, he also a professional player. DNY is disappointed with ZC, the more he knows him, the more he regret ever accepting, even try the game for ZC. Later for some reason ZC married in game with Jane, then Jane trick DNY & let monsters kill him, DNY last thought is his hatred towards Jane. MC checks Jane background, real name Yu Jian in the same university with DNY & ZC, he have a huge crush on ZC & often stalk him, but ZC didn’t even know he exist, he’s ugly, don’t have any friend, very jealous of DNY. He wants to do cosmetic surgery, but don’t have the money. He found that ZC is a professional gamer like him, he play the same game & make a handsome avatar, he want to do cosmetic surgery to match this handsome avatar, he save money, even lie to his parents to get more money, but it’s still not enough. He get close to ZC in game world & enjoying others chasing him, when they have ambivalent relationship, ZC suddenly announced that DNY finally agree to be with him, even introducing DNY to their team. He hate DNY very much, when he see monster tearing DNY apart, he feel very happy. Their team smoothly enter the top 100 thanks to DNY funds, he secretly use DNY funds & get a lot of money. In reality he deliberately destroy his face & using his funds, undergo cosmetic surgery to match his avatar. Before, he make many excuse not to attend gathering, after surgery he come & amazed many people. ZC at first sad about DNY death, but later get together with the handsome Jane, many people are envious of him. MC opened his eyes & see the sky already dark, he feel that this game world is very realistic, if they are tired/sleepy they need to sleep. For MC it’s very easy to kill any player or take over group of youngster to follow him, however directly killing them is too cheap for them, he prefers to torment their hearts & minds. MC think when they discover Jane true appearance, things will get exciting. At dawn, ZC call him to go to the mall, they never give him anything, just use him for his funds, acting like an upstart. MC take what he needs, Jane see MC walk with ZC feel jealous, he take many high price goods, thought he will empty MC pocket & get rid of him. Others leisurely chatting outside, waiting for MC to pay, when MC go out, they check their inventory, but didn’t find anything. ZC ask if MC properly pay, MC blankly said he paid what he got. Others shocked, asking why, MC said he think he already paid enough before, he will not spend a penny for them anymore. Jane said other than money, MC have no other use, if he want to be protected, he have to pay. MC said he can easily find other team, they can be his bodyguard, attitude definitely will be much better than them. Others can’t refute him, bc there are rich player like MC before, but only MC quietly paid everything for them. DNY himself actually didn’t know this bc he’s a first time player, he also panicking bc this is the first time he encounter such a thing. ZC tried to be peacemaker, he tell others to go back first, he’ll persuade MC. In front of MC room, ZC tried to persuade MC, MC call him hypocrite & close his door. MC take the things he buy & use it to improve his refining level, he actually can use system to enhance the weapons, but it’ll be suspicious, so he can only do it this way. He spend day & night refining, when he’s about to rest someone knock his door, he ignore it, but the knock got louder. MC open the door & see Jane, he sneered at MC & tell him to get down bc they about to fight monsters. MC scolds him, saying he never said he want to join hunting monsters. All this time Jane deliberately took MC & let him get injured, seeing MC got hit, he feels happy. Jane said MC not willing to pay, not participate in hunting; did he expect them to protect waste like MC? MC sneering, said he is a waste in game world, Jane is a waste in real world, he despise MC, MC look down on him more. Jane arrogantly said he’s better whether in game or real world, MC call Jane real name, said he remember his appearance. Jane shocked saying he don’t understand what MC saying & denies everything. MC said no need to explain, everyone will know later. Jane friend calls him, Jane tell them to leave MC & go hunt, the friend confused, he thought Jane said he’ll teach MC this time. Jane heart is in chaos, he think he need to get rid of MC. MC busy for a while, then feel hungry, he go down to the kitchen to prepare food, the team come back in an awkward appearance, it seems the fight is a vicious one. Originally they want to take MC out to teach him how difficult it is to live here, but bc MC didn’t come out, they can only do normal hunt, but besieged by group of poisonous flying spiders that catch them unprepared, although no one die, but everyone got hit hard today. They return with serious wounds, seeing MC having a leisure meal, they feel angered. One teammate, Hei Ying use potions & hatefully see MC, before he never use high level potions, he needs to support his family, so most his money is sent to his family, he hates rich people most, he feels they like to show off their money, when MC paying, he always took the most expensive things. He also like to kill rich people, he temporary didn’t kill MC, but he don’t want MC to live better too, he knows Jane like ZC, but ZC engaged with MC, he thinks if he see his boyfriend be with others, even in game, they must feel uncomfortable. He proposed to let Jane marry with ZC so they can improve the team overall strength, many member support this, Jane full of hope, looked at ZC. ZC hesitate, Jane pull ZC to talk alone, the others cheering on them. MC watching the play, unconcerned, the plot moving more quickly than the original, but this have nothing to do with him, bc he’s going to left this team, but he needs to get ZC consent to withdraw form team, MC think he can use this to make ZC agree. ZC & Jane come back & announced they’ll get married tomorrow, ZC check MC & relieved he’s not angry, but also unhappy of his uncaring attitude. HY goading MC said they have to make a grand wedding for this happy occasion, MC unconcerned, said ofc, the grander the better, expenses is shared by team, he don’t care about money, but hearing HY word, at last people alive, money gone, it’s a tragedy. MC is disgusted with people like HY, MC said the expense is shared by team; he’ll pay his share, then go upstairs. The team discussed & decided to hold simple celebration, people are not willing to spend their own money. In the evening, ZC go to MC room, ZC sit on MC bed, but scolded by MC, so he can only stand. ZC explain that he only love MC, with Jane only for the game, he hope in the real world, they still together. MC said he don’t care who ZC marries, in this opportunity he want to make it clear that they don’t have the so-called lover relationship anymore, not even friends, only old classmates. ZC kneeling on the bedside, asking MC to reconsider, he only do this to ensure their life, but he still want to be with MC. MC said he also want to live, but he don’t want to be with ZC, he’d rather die than be with ZC, then chase him out. ZC tell MC if he disagree, he’ll won’t marry Jane, MC said he don’t care & close his door. Jane witness this scene & feel complicated, he’s happy tomorrow will marry ZC, but hearing ZC won’t marry him if MC don’t approve, his mood become complicated, he already said so much to ZC, but can’t compare to MC? He determined to make ZC fall in love with him. On the wedding day, MC see the food & think the food is unappetizing, he already pay for the wedding, but the food is like this, he may as well get his own food. He go back to his room to refine weapon so he at least have learning record. ZC & Jane in wedding room, the crowd demanding them to kiss, ZC reluctantly accept Jane kissing him, after the crowd left, Jane flirting & tempting ZC, they spend the wedding night together. MC plan to keep improving his refining level, then notice the group energy value increase a lot, it’s only one night, he think those two people can really work hard, then he sleep. Next morning, MC comes down & see Jane & ZC, Jane see MC down said to ZC, husband I help you create high-level weapon, ZC notice MC, move away a little from Jane & said call him like usual, he’s not used to it. Jane get close again, persuade him to call each other husband like last night. MC eat, then go upstairs, Jane is waiting for him, directly tell him stay away from his husband. MC laughed, said he won’t take the initiative to find ZC, Jane said MC know ZC have feeling for MC, so MC should avoid him, in this world MC is third wheel. MC amazed, saying Jane very shameless, is it bc he don’t want him to tell ZC Jane’s real appearance? Jane avoid eye contact for a moment, then said if MC dare to slander him, he won’t let him stay in this team, just try it. MC mock scared, I’m scared to death, hurry let me out of this team, thank you, then go to his room. The time for 100 ranking is getting near, the team said they should go to the mall, implying MC must pay this time, MC said he don’t need anything, so he won’t come. A said MC have to pay for the team bc he only a waste here, only dragging them back, money is the only thing he have. MC ask which time he drag them back? No one can say it, Jane said he is a complete newbie, if he’s not with them, he’ll immediately get killed by others. MC said he already told them any other team will welcome him bc he is rich, the money he already give them is exceeding what they do for him. Jane threaten MC either he pay or withdraw form team, ZC about to convince MC to pay for now, arguing is meaningless, MC loudly say he choose to quit. ZC ask what did he say, MC looked at him said word by word, I said I’m going to quit your team. Everyone stunned, didn’t expect MC choose to quit, only Jane is ecstatic, he think he can kill MC easily if he left the team. MC draw form to withdraw from team & wait for ZC to approve, ZC tries to stop MC & said he can protect him here, MC sneer said he don’t want to, even a minute he don’t want to stay. Jane seeing ZC hesitation is getting angry, he force ZC to choose between him & MC, others also backing Jane, ZC reluctantly agrees to release MC after Jane coax him. MC said he’ll not have anything with this team anymore, Jane ridiculed him, telling MC not to come back crying to them, they will not accept him back. MC said good, then turned away, ZC called him but MC ignores him. Jane wanted to kill him immediately, but can’t do it in front of ZC, but he resolved not to let MC live. MC stay in hotel for 3 days & complete all the basic training from low to senior refining division, he can make any weapon. He decided to hunt monsters to gather materials, when he review the map, game system suddenly release group attack task, the reward is precisely what MC want, he transferred to the location, when he arrived, there’s already some group fighting the monster, MC use protective cover to stop rubbles flying towards him. MC waiting on sidelines, more group appeared, only him solo, ZC team appeared too, ZC ask what are MC doing, MC ignore him. A ridiculing MC, ZC call MC to take cover from the rubble, MC completely ignore them. Jane pulled ZC to quickly defeat the monster & give MC ruthless look. MC found the monster main body, use the weapon he refine to fly, when he arrive he immediately try to attack, but suddenly wind & sand storm obstructing MC, using his weapon, MC barely able to withstand it, but he can’t see anything. Most people is blown away, some directly die, MC crouch to wait the storm out. When it stopped, no one is attacking, MC know it’s dangerous, but think this is his chance, he flew to the target, but a barrage of blasting rock(?) is coming towards him, suddenly a string of thunder passing him & blast those stone a tall figure flew over him, MC follow him to see if the man need his help, he’s not used to owe others, the man seemed strong, he ward off another barrage of stones, MC think he don’t need help, suddenly a big fireball flew towards them, MC open protective cover, strengthened by system to protect himself & that man. The man surprised, don’t know if he amazed by the fireball or MC protective cover. MC send a strong energy to the man so he can finish the monster, the man didn’t resist MC energy & quickly defeat the monster.  MC wait to see what items the monster give & shocked it was 2 rare & precious stones, MC feel envious of that man luck. The man’s teammate clamoring to him, MC prepares to leave, the man suddenly walked over to him, MC stunned looking at his handsome face, he’s guessing this is that man real appearance, since it doesn’t look fake. The man split the treasures with MC, MC surprised, didn’t think the man so generous, splitting the treasure in half with him, MC accept & notice his game name is Zuo QiFeng (ML), ML ask if DNY is his real name, MC said yes, ML ask if MC don’t have a team, MC tell him he just quit a team, hasn’t join another team yet, ML immediately invite him to his team, A team. MC surprised, see ML teammate looks decent & good, he act like considering this, but is reviewing the people using system. The crowd notices the treasure split with MC, saw MC is solo, they’re thinking of killing MC & take the treasure. ZC seeing MC considering the offer, ask MC to come back to his team, MC immediately reject him, ZC try to coax MC, saying his team has agree to let MC come back, MC notice his team showing greed in their eyes. After MC left the team don’t have any fund to buy good items, they regret driving MC out too soon, also MC now have the rare stones. MC tell ML he agree to join him, ZC yelling at MC urgently, but ignored. ML immediately accepts MC, from system, MC knows ML & his team is reliable. Others see A team impressive weapons didn’t dare to make trouble, ZC tightly grip his fist, watching them go. ML team residence is luxurious 3-storey villa with garden & swimming pool. They held welcome banquet for MC, MC know the people in this team mostly is influential & successful people in real world, they did not seem to worry of their survival, MC think this is the true self-confidence, rather than keep worrying, it’s better to work harder. The next morning, MC saw one teammate complaining about his weapon, MC offered to repair it. MC quickly repair it & the teammate surprised that MC doing it so quickly, he’s a bit distrustful bc repair shop usually have to spend 5-6 hours to fix the weapon, but receive it anyway. Other teammate notifies them that their capture target appeared. MC task is to protect & increase their energy, when the teammate use the weapon MC refined, they all shocked seeing the powerful performance. They smoothly defeated their target, everyone is excited & praise MC. ML tell them to go back, then staring at MC, thinking he never thought he’ll inexplicably fall in love in a game with a man. Back in the house, the team discussing MC’s strong protective cover & MC’s op refining skill, they ask MC to help them refine their weapon, in exchange; MC can take anything he wants from their inventory. ML tells MC not to overdo it & that he have given MC a way to access his & team space/inventory. MC surprised, even partners rarely done so, he jokingly ask if ML not afraid he’ll sell everything for cash? ML subconsciously want to say if it’s MC, he can take it all, but feel that it’s not appropriate, he just said he don’t doubt MC. MC thanked ML, ML rubbed MC’s hair, they both stunned, ML just unconsciously move, feels like he have done this countless time, very natural, MC feel familiar feelings. When ML left, MC feel a bit disappointed bc he didn’t get any familiar feeling from staring at ML’s eyes, but think he’ll have chance to prove his suspicion. In less than 2 days, MC finished modifying all weapon, the team really like it. Suddenly storm come & the game system announced a task for tomorrow. The team go to buy serum to resist poison, coincidentally, ZC team also want to buy the item. ZC ask them to give up the item to them, bc they come first, A team disagree, bc both side want to buy the item, according to the rules, it enters auction process. ZC team barely able to afford item’s original price, but they don’t want to give up. To safe face, they keep bidding against ML, suddenly MC tell ML to give up the bid, Jane angrily ask why, MC said the price increases too much, there’s another item with that price with better effect. Jane is very angry but can’t retract the bid; in the end Jane pay the penalty for cancelling. Next day, A team choose the best lodging, HY complaining MC preferential treatment, others feel if they didn’t drove MC out, they’ll enjoy luxurious accommodation. ZC want to pull MC to talk, MC refuse, when MC teammate try to help MC, ZC tell them MC is his boyfriend. ML coldly looked at ZC, MC tell ZC he is a married man, they don’t have any relationship anymore, he’s not even ex-boyfriend, only old classmates. ZC begs MC to let him talk, MC asks for ML permission with puppy eyes, at first ML silent, but seeing MC face, he can’t refuse. MC tell ZC he only have 2 minutes, ZC ask if A Team let MC pay everything, MC ask what’s his problem, ZC said he’s worried they’ll squeeze MC clean, then abandon him. MC sneer saying it’s what ZC team do to him, since he join ML, he never paid a penny, then leave. ZC is disbelieving, he thought MC don’t have any skill, so if not for money, they won’t let MC join. On the mission, many players shocked seeing A Team weapon’s performance & MC strong protective cover. A Team set the record for shortest time to complete the task. MC lamenting the game is too real, the smell of blood makes him uncomfortable & his body feels sticky. MC decided to take a bath, when relaxing MC feel amused thinking about ZC team, suddenly ML ask what MC thinking about, shocking MC. ML ask if he scared MC & apologize, then enter the water & sit beside MC. MC feel embarrassed, turned his head away. ML ask what’s MC so happy about, MC said he think about ZC team, ML ask MC relationship with ZC, MC explained everything, ML feel distressed & angry for MC. MC want ML to go first, but ML didn’t seem to be in a hurry, so he can only stand up, but feel dizzy, ML caught & hug him. MC about to thank ML, but stare at each other instead. Suddenly his bath towel fall to the water, he quickly pick & wear it, ML hand intentional/unintentionally touch MC buttock, face burning, MC thank ML & flee. MC annoyed with himself, he don’t know yet if ML is his love, also, he didn’t feel disgusted at all. He resolved to find out. ZC team is puzzled with MC’s strong protective cover, they waited for A team to retreat from the target monster, so they can take advantage after the monster is weak, but A team obviously overwhelming the monster. Jane whisper something to HY, HY agree, he raise a mole(?), it can make hole on any material. They planned to let the mole make a hole on MC cover & kill him, so they can kill the target monster. MC notice the mole & guess what they want to do, HY attack MC, but unable to. A team notice HY & turn their weapon on him. MC tells A team to kill target monster & leave HY to him, they agree. ZC team is shocked seeing MC able to deploy 2 protective cover, even Jane can’t do it. MC whip HY to death, ZC tried to stop him, but MC ignores him. ZC team attack MC protective cover, but unable to breach it, ZC tried to negotiate, asking why MC so vicious, MC sneer HY is the one who start it, so HY can attack, but he can’t defend himself? MC said he hate this kind of people, if ZC have to ability, they can help him take revenge, then proceed to kill HY. They quarreled for a while, Jane attack MC, but got whipped, he witness MC whip HY to death, he don’t want to experience it. ZC team about to attack MC, but suppressed by A team impressive aura(?). ZC tells MC they are now enemies & left. A team currently ranked first by a wide margin. MC examine the treasure dropped by target monster, if MC can study the treasure, he can solve the game problem & save everyone. MC go to ML room, ML only wearing bath towel, MC enter the room & seeing ML didn’t plan to dress, MC suddenly feel thirsty. MC report to ML he found problem with the treasure that might be directly related to the game problem. ML ask MC to elaborate, MC show ML what he found, also said he’s able to raise weapon’s energy so high is bc he found the wrong code & revised it. MC said the error code at refining process might be the cause of game system failure. ML starts an emergency conference with A team & explain everything. MC said he’s about 90% sure this is the problem, in theory he can solve it. ML ask MC to try, if MC really can do it, they will contact the game technician. MC & one teammate busy for 2 days, then stopped bc of new mission. The team split into group of 2-3 to search for target monster. MC & ML found it, they see a beautiful female player crying for help, ML quickly kill the monster. The girl thanking MC & ML, when she’s about to approach them, ML wields his weapon towards her. The girl act pitiful, asking if MC & ML don’t feel bad bullying a girl, MC think how can he feel bad? This is the first time he done such a thing. The girl said she’ll do anything as long as they don’t kill her, MC tell her that her acting is bad, the monster said since they discover her identity, she can’t beat them, can only let them slaughter her, but she invite them to ‘play’ with her first. ML expressionless, MC 囧. The monster slowly untie her clothes, MC said he don’t like women, ML said he’s the same. The monster stunned, said she miscalculated, then turn into a man. ML said it’s not his type, the monster ask what’s his type. ML looked at MC said he like someone like him, but it’s no use if the monster imitate MC, fake is a fake. MC blushing, the monster surprised, thinking they are lovers, she/he quickly try to escape, MC use something to capture her/him, suddenly 2 man appeared asking loudly what they are doing. It’s ZC & Jane, the monster ask them to save her/him. ZC scolds MC, ML coldly say either go or die with her/him. ML fought with ZC, MC take out his whip, Jane use protective cover, but shattered by a single whip from MC, Jane terrified, retreat a few steps. MC whip Jane when he notify his team, he said to Jane he hate people imitating his face, how about he destroy his face now? Jane terrified, trembling, the monster asks MC not to use the whip to kill her/him, she/he wants to die beautiful. When ZC team arrives, ZC & Jane is lying on the ground covered in blood, Jane’s face badly scarred. A team also arrives & ask ML such a good show, why don’t they inform them earlier. MC tells them to let ZC team go, ML reluctant, he wants to take revenge for MC, MC tell him to keep them alive to suffer. ML tell them to scram in 5 seconds, ZC team took ZC & Jane & flee. One of A team ask who is the monster (currently in female form), she appealed to him to save her, another person said he don’t like big breasted woman, he likes flat chested men. The monster’s heart suffered a million damage, she resolved next time will use male form to tempt player. A team finish the task & got lots of points. They go back & try to solve the error code, they contacted the technicians & told them the problem. The game technician reported to their superior & agree to try MC approach. ML tell MC he’ll escort him to MC room, MC a bit confused but didn’t refuse. In front of the door, ML kiss MC, but MC didn’t feel the familiar feeling. MC enter his room & feel upset, then guessing that maybe he don’t feel it bc they are now in game world. MC resolved to keep a certain distance with ML for now, bc he can’t bear to love 2 different person. The game technician release an announcement about MC finding, for now players need to join A team, but they have to let MC freely enter their space/inventory, so he can take all the error code. A lot of player is tempted bc A team is now in the leading position, guaranteed to be in 100 rank, but they hesitate bc of the requirement to let MC enter their space/inventory. Some weaker team join A team to ensure survival, more team is tempted to join too. ZC team feels conflicted, they have bad blood with A team, but they want to survive. ZC & Jane still injured from the last time, Jane have an idea to join other team, bc only 100 exit available, A team will only allow 100 member, they can join other team to oppose A team. Others is unconvinced, but ZC agree, they unite with several team, soon, A team have 100 member, lots of people regret their hesitation to join A team. The member that join A team still feel wary A team will take all their inventory, but they found A team never stir up trouble, no infighting, no other requirement for them. Moreover, although some treasures are taken from their space, it wasn’t long before the treasure is returned even better than the original performance, they feel very happy. The team that join together to oppose A team called themselves Joint Counterattack. When the 3rd mission opened, they planned to besiege A team. The people in JC team are selfish, thinking they can at least reduce A team member, so they have the chance to join A team. The 3rd mission is in a maze, JC team quickly occupy the hills & wait to ambush A team. When ML call MC to come over, MC hesitate, others quickly urge them to finish the mission, MC depressed, thinking he recently deliberately avoid ML, bc if ML is not his love, he don’t want to deepen their feelings. ML push MC to a wall to avoid trap, then ask why MC avoid him, MC said they have task, ML said the task is unimportant, then demand MC to answer him. MC bite the bullet & tell ML he don’t want temporary feelings, he don’t want to start anything in game world, he want real relationship. ML ask if ZC leave shadow in MC heart, MC denied it, saying he don’t have feeling toward ZC. MC sincerely looked at ML, they can try when they go back to reality, ML agree, but demand MC not to avoid him in reality or he will use any means to stop MC from hiding. MC said wait until they go back to reality, ML dissatisfied but didn’t push MC further. Meanwhile, JC team is defeated, many of their members die, they fought with each other, blaming ZC & Jane, never thought A team weapon will be so powerful. JC team split up. A team successfully complete the mission. A few days later, A team give an announcement that they accept more member, MC has solved the error code & set more escape exit. Lots of player excited, A team new member couldn’t help but feel nervous, they think if more player join A team, their survival rate will drop. Game system notify player that the number of escape exit increases, the number is exactly the same with the member A team has accepted. A team veteran member explained everything to the new member, the new member happy & full of gratitude. Only ZC team is in a complex mood, in the end they still want to live, so they resolved to ask for MC forgiveness & give back what MC has given them so he’ll let them join A team. ZC said as long as they can all join, whatever request MC ask, he’ll do it. He thought, surely MC will exclude him & Jane. Two of A team member see that ZC team come, they thought they’ll choose death than join them, they decided to see what ZC team going to say. ZC ask them to call MC bc they want to apologize. A team message MC, MC replied he’s too busy to hear their apology, only said to let them the last to join A team. ZC tell A team they sincerely come to apologize & give back everything MC has given them. A team see all the items said, ZC team is very greedy, MC tell them to let ZC team join them, but if they didn’t follow the rule, they’ll be miserable. A team message Water Ghost team leader & tell him to handle ZC team. ZC team asks about their impressive weapon, is it modified by game technician? WG team leader said the one who modify the weapon is MC, they are disbelieving, WG only explain that MC will took items from their space to take out the error code, after getting it back, the weapon will be many times better. Other team captain ask WG captain about ZC team, they tell WG captain that ZC team have bad blood with MC, they feel offended for MC & agreed to deliberately bully ZC team. ZC team is excluded in everything & feel others hostility, they thought if not for Jane, MC will not leave their team & it’s their team that will become respected, the team hate Jane now. In the final stage, game technician arrange those who already died to join A team. MC requested to let each player real body grouped by their own team, his purpose ofc to expose the real Jane. They all go back to reality, Jane touch his face is not scarred, but not the smooth face from the game, when he looked around, he see everyone around him shocked seeing him. One teammate asks if he’s Jane, Jane desperately denied it; the others finally understand why Jane never attend party gathering before. Jane used to say that the game appearance is automatically set up by game system after scanning himself; they now know Jane deceive them. One teammate said the most pitiful is ZC, he exchange wealthy handsome boyfriend with such goods. ZC think he actually slept with such a person so many times & feel nauseated. ZC scolds Jane, it’s bc of him he lost MC. Other players excited to see log out button & immediately exit. MC tell ML he want to go back, ML said he’ll find MC, MC said he’ll wait for ML. ML demanded MC not to avoid him anymore, MC didn’t dare to agree & quickly log out. MC wake up & found his body in a hospital, after 2 days he’s discharged, his parents stayed with him until he’s healthy. MC refused to go home with his parent & assure them he’s already ok, MC now waiting for ML. MC waiting in his residence feel nervous, he’s afraid ML is not his love, MC don’t have the mood to cook, he go to restaurant frequented by DNY. A waiter come & give him a steak & a bottle of red wine, MC tell the waiter he didn’t order it. The waiter tell MC a gentleman surnamed Feng sent MC this & give MC a large bouquet of white roses. MC think for a moment & accept the bouquet, Feng Qi is ML real name, MC wondered how ML know he liked white roses? MC recall the first time he like white rose is from the first world ML, he always sent MC white roses. ML suddenly appeared behind MC, ask MC if he like it. MC said which one did he ask, the rose or the wine? ML said both, MC said he really like it. After dinner MC still feel nervous, ML offered to send MC back, MC refuse said he have a car, ML said then you send me back. MC nervous but he have to know sooner or later, so he let ML send him back. At MC home, he kiss ML, ML stunned for 2 second, then kiss MC back forcefully. MC feel the familiar feeling almost cry, he didn’t love the wrong person, whatever the circumstances, the one he falls in love with is his lover. They happily go to bed together (chapter 67). The next morning, ZC come to apologize to MC, MC said he’ll forgive ZC as long as he never show up in front of MC ever again. ZC beg MC to give him a chance, ML come out wearing only bathrobe, ZC accuse MC of infidelity, MC couldn’t careless & shut his door. When ZC come back to his home, he notice Jane & angrily yelled at him not to find him ever again. Jane pitifully said they already married, ZC said it’s only a game, everything is fake, then enter his home. ML introduce MC to A team veteran, they call MC sister-in-law, MC discovered they all childhood friend & in reality ML also the leader. After the party ML bought MC back to his home, saying from now on this is their home. For MC every encounter is a miracle, so he especially cherish the short time they have together, the daily kiss, hug & sleep is his precious memory.. 
 
  • #5
Looks. So. Interesting! *internally crying bc cant read cn*

Someone pls inform me if this ever got translated!

I'll give you cookies!  
 
  • #6
Since i read the first arc on danmeila and had this problem, i would recommend the sto.cc site (but no guarantee that it will have less typos in first arc) and now i am currently reading at the sto.cc site

I don‘t think you will be disappointed with the cooking arc, it‘s also a bit refreshing that ML doesn‘t appear immediately and MC doesn‘t rely on him entirely.

Also, ML lets MC do what he wants in all the arcs so far, the only condition is that they spend as much time together as they can xD 
 
  • #7
I think this is the first bl thread I’ve seen with a very long first post 
 
  • #8
maybe lack strokes, forgot to add more strokes or sth ? 
 
  • #9
I don‘t know, i honestly don‘t pity him, he did many horrible things even in this life with mc: he slandered mc and gave interviews that made mc bad, he asked his rich friend by pretending to be a nice guy that got treated unjustly so that this rich guy would try to kill mc, the car accident was instigated by him. He also saw how mc‘s mom killed herself and slandered her name. He planned to trap mc at the beginning to ruin him financially and his name and in the last life he even succeeded. I can‘t stand these fake two-faced people who only feel better, when they stump on other people‘s faces to elevate themselves.
The one i kinda pity is the foster son of the Music Arc, bc he did this out of jealousy and his insecurities. But even then i didn‘t like him, bc he could have lived a peaceful life even without all that drama. 
 
  • #10
i didn't finish it yet.
in taiwan is now earthquake time, for 3 days now, so i was a bit pre-occupied... ^^U 
 
  • #12
FoD MC can perfect his body to the limit of that world and also spy on people via electronics and hack if its available i think, but otherwise everything else he uses to his advantage is knowledge.

If this MC is like that then its not super OP i guess. 
 
  • #13
The chance of this being translated seems small tbh ^^ out of all the recs thread i did, only 2-3 got picked up.
If you really want it translated, you could post this novel on the pick up thread and see if anyone is interested ^^ 
 
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