What's up guys, this is my first attempt in writing a web novel. I'm open to any feedback so that I can improve my story as it progresses.hope you guys enjoy Ryo's journey.

I’ve read your novel, and it’s amazing! The world you’ve created is so detailed and pulls the reader in completely. The characters are really well written, each with their own personality and depth that make them feel real. This novel is truly excellent and shows your talent so well!I’m a passionate Commissioned based  digital comic artist with a knack for crafting immersive worlds and dynamic characters. My expertise lies in creating custom, high quality comic art.I will offer budget friendly prices and discounts . I also have been transform a script inspired by your story .Let’s collaborate to make your vision a reality.  and I’d love to discuss your project. My work is Available on Linktree and on Deviantart .   further. Feel free to contact me on discord:emily_jamess_ . Hoping for a positive response .Thanks

overall very good, it's fucking awesome😍😍

Whoever you are! Keep up the good work; this journey of yours seems really promising, not going to lie, so far so good. Hope this journey will be wild and is filled with adventures. Fastened my seat belt already.

Something I think about time-from-time is if I were to die, and come back to life in a different body, which me would be me? Would the new, current me be the true me? But then, would the previous me, the me I had spent my whole life as, would that me have just been a like, a fake? I believe that’s what this story wants to tell: who am I? This translucent “I” that changes constantly, who is that “I”? Can something ever changing be confined to a singular name?I wonder how this story will develop and who Zephyr—Ra’eh will assert themself as. Will they be either of the two, or will they adopt a new identity? I wonder.

Author here guys :)Aaron Vale is a young man with an unyielding spirit. He is the kind of guy who will stop at nothing to achieve his dreams. To capture the essence of his ambition and the challenges that come with it, join him on his journey as he navigates the complexities of life and the pursuit of his ambitions. Aaron reflects that one spirit within everyone who was burden by one's responsibilities.Hope You guys will like it.

I’m really intrigued after reading the first few chapters and enjoying every bit of it. I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen next!

What is going on after chapter 79? There's repeat after repeat and are you also accidentally putting another books chapters here? Everything is a mess after that.

solid reincarnation plot with cool, interesting idea and a fresh premise. waiting for a deeper character development and more exploration to the new world😌

First of all i want to start with saying that i do not usually give reviews but in this case i had to give one out of sheer disappointment i had with it,first of all main character is  stupid and you do not have to do much to know about it just read the free chapters and you will know but for those who are here just to take a glance as to what to expect from the novel Our MC was supposedly a S rank hero and so he knows a lot of things (as expected ) the world is a changed i admit but not so much that he did not know anything at all,so he knows that the government is corrupt and they will experiment on him if he draws too much attention and they can also involve his family and OK his parents were not there in his previous life for him but atleast his little sister was but the first thing our MC does after getting a little power up and a CHEAT SWORD is to fight monsters in rift outbreak even though he did not have to and why?only because he can get a LITTLE stronger that's right just for a little power up he exposes himself on LIVE TV alongside his Unique sword and got seriously injured even though he confidently stated he will handle it,So ok mistake happened but it should be Ok afterwards right afterall our MC surely would not put himself in danger after his Mom cried and scolded him understandably and he promised himself to do better and what would you know just the very next task the MC does is to RISK his life and how you will ask?well he sneak into an illegal auction that very day for a C rank skill That's right readers for a C rank skill that is supposed to make someone immortal now how is that possible for such a low level skill who knows?ask the author for making such a stupid power system,anyways the thing is that it did not go smoothly as expected,because something changed and then the MC would have to go against a very very very powerful woman to get a skill(which is a different skill not the immortal one)and he said he had a plan to do it and well what could that possible plan be well it is to just bid without having any money and then try to steal the box and get out of the window without being caught by the woman(who can kill a man just with a flick of her sword from a distance as MC had already seen it before happening) and then reality happened and when MC stole the skill book he got caught by the women that very second and then he got enlightenment that he cannot escape even after having such a grand plan of heist from that woman SURPRISE SURPRISE! Well that was a long rant the only thing i will say that the MC is the stupidest character you can ever get and this book is only good if you want to turn your mind off,and for those who think that MC will get better through character development that will not happen he will get trouble every time due to his stupidity and only get out due to plot armor and there is NO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT Aside that from MC and Evangleline aside from then every other is just a cardboard character

This looks very promising, I've only read a few chapters and i'm hooked. You have to check it out, it's really good, nice work author!👍

Its quite good cant wait for updates i feel like its pretty good written and provides some information on the boxing world which is cool overall pretty good book for only having 5 chapters at the momment im writing the review