World Hopping: God, Shine Bright!

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  • #26
2 days gap.

Chapter 5 (partial)
ChuZheng took back her hand, looking at the black-dyed fingernails. Looks good, why would he flinched from it? She looked at him, and looked at her nails.
Get up first.
She bent down and picked him up by his collar, YeChen was choking as he got dragged up. Seeing the standing unsteadily and falling, she suddenly let go and moved back, making YeChen fell directly onto the ground.
(I'm sorry but lol CZ what are you doing? Your EQ is in the negative or something? He's not flinching because of your nails. You don't help someone stand by choking them. If they're falling, you don't let them go and let them fall lol OMG girl, what are you doing??)
His palm hit the ground, painful. He cast an angry glare at ChuZheng.
ChuZheng: ....(I didn't know you're such a weakling. Don't look at me like this. I didn't mean it.)
Taking a deep breath, ChuZheng picked him up by his arm this time. YeChen struggled, but he was just beaten up, so head no strength. She didn't even feel his so called struggle. She took him to a chair (probably bench) near them. YeChen looked at her with wary and angry eyes, it made him looked like a bullied beast. Looking at him, she can't help but reach out and pat his hair. Feeling it so soft, ChuZheng's expression became more obvious.
So soft!
If she touched it again, would he be angry?
She looked at the young boy, still staring back at her with anger. Ignoring him, with an expressionless face she touched his hair again.
Touch once is touching, touching twice is also touching.
Just touch you.
YeChen had been beaten, bullied, humiliated before, but being touched like this by such a person, he was embarrassed, and finally got angry. "Have you touched enough?!" he screamed. ChuZheng retracted her hand, told him to wait there in a cold, emotionless voice. She bent down and stared at YeChen, threatening him "Run and I'll break your legs". Not that he can run, he don't have the strength with his beaten up body. ChuZheng came back with a pack of meds. YeChen was suspicious. This girl was infamous at school, a great bully. Who even goes against her would be miserable. Even though he was not bullied by her directly, her group did bully him. He clenched his hand, it must be that her group is around somewhere, waiting to jump him.
ChuZheng pulled his hand but YeChen tugged it back, don't want her to touch him. "Don't move",she said. The rough actions caused the wound to tear and bleed. YeChen bit his teeth, she must have done this deliberately. The alcohol (probably one of those rubbing alcohol thing you can bought at pharmacy, don't wash you wounds with booze kids) poured into his palm stings. It hurts worse than the beating but he didn't make a sound, just silently looking at the girl cleaning and putting band aid on his wound.
YeChen: What are you trying to do?
ChuZheng: (pulled his other hand, replying in a cold voice) Let you think I'm a nice person.
YeChen: What games are you playing? Aren't you just waiting for me to believe you and then you'll laugh at me?
Such tricks, he already experienced it before. I'm gonna be simplifying sentences when I can't make sense of them, or they involve canon fodders. The rest is coming in a few hours. 
 
  • #27
In a bit, I'm currently at work. But I'm probably not posting anything as detailed as the two chapters above, that's just to let readers understand the premise. Though I'd do some dialogues...what can I say, I like it when MC abused their obnoxious system.

It's not BL btw....for those who reads this thread posted by yours truly, I don't only read danmei even though that's most of my reading materials haha... 
 
  • #28
Nooo !!!!! Please when you have time can you spoil some more  
 
  • #29
Chapter 11:
It's SanMao.
There's a Chinese proverb "A toad wanting to eat swan meat" where Toad is someone ugly while Swan Meat is someone beautiful. The paragraph was saying MengRan was a handsome guy, even if JCZ liked him it's not unusual, but JCZ is a toad wanting to eat swan meat, MengRan should be matched with someone fitting of his stature.
The Great/King System used to talk in a cutesy tone, but now it is talking in a stern tone. It is probably angry when CZ changed his name. Whatever, just continue calling him Bastard.

As for the names, I've included the pinyin and the Chinese in my previous posts. When doing names, you should check th Chinese characters instead of relying on the translation. The translations tried to translate even the names so they aren't what they are supposed to sound like.

Chapter 9:
She's saying that if someone find trouble with them, just have her pay them 3 times the amount they were hired to cause them trouble.

Chapter 10:
Not WangBaGu, it's WangBaDan (王八蛋) which is a derogatory term, can be translated into Bastard or SOB. System was angry that his name Great/King/Wang-zhe (王者) got changed by CZ into Bastard/WangBaDan. 
 
  • #30
Currently reading arc 1, and MC likes ML in that he is a "great mobile storage" in that when she has to spend a certain amount of money, she can just use the money on him lol 
 
  • #32
YC is having a bleeding noseMC gives him some paper towels YC hesitates before taking them to stop his bleeding noseThey talkYC: did you just find those people just now?
Mc: Well... You treat me well so I want you to think that I'm a good person.
YC: ...Why are you trying to make me feel like you're a good person?
MC: *Lost in thought* Well...

MC: *What should I do...say I'm on a mission?*
System screams: *NOOOOO!!!! You can't say that you're doing a task!*
MC and system argue about what MC should do
System: Just say that you like him

I give up 
 
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