pls countinue,this novel have everything I can ask for in a cricket novel.

Behold, and author filled with utter shamelessness*"The Shattered Realm: Forgotten Echoes" is my entry for the 2025 WSA, and I’m honestly just having fun with it! This is a story filled with mysteries, intense moments, and a few twists that I hope will keep you hooked.I’m still growing as a writer, so feel free to drop feedback—but, you know, let’s keep it constructive. No need to roast me too hard! 😆If you have any questions or just want to chat about the story, I’m all ears. Hope you enjoy the ride!*

If you want a story that includes Yuri, but doesn’t have any grammatical errors that might break your immersion, this is the book for you.The world building is superb if you took the time to go through each of them.Updates are very consistent.Overall, you should give it a try!

I hope to capture and blow everyone’s mind with this trill going novel

What the fuck did I just read?. was the text written by a mentally retarded child? ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............ ............

Hi angels! (Devil's smirk!)i imagine myself at times with reading a good book, dealing with stress while rocking to God is a woman by Ari<3!FEW THINGS TO HAVE IN MIND ABOUT THIS BOOK;This book is going to be a werewolf story but not your usual. There would be twists here and there and it is fine if you don't like it but trust me when I say it wouldn't be disappointing.This story is targeted to a more mature audience, so viewers discretion is advised.It is not a perfect book but will definitely have a special place in your heart once given a chance.Share, love, give power stones and gifts to give this story of mine a chance on webnovel! Your support on this book is going to mean the whole world to me!And daily updates is promised <3

Its's not what you think when you read the title of this novel

Admittedly, I didn't like how chapter 1 was written but it got better as the chapters progressed. Main character needs to have more personality. Overall the plot seems interesting  and it would be better if slight adjustments were made

Review from ch 267. This story started on a good foundation but took a nosedive after ch 100. The story is on rails for the MC at this point, as everything he does magically works out and he always faces the easiest opposition as the author forgets his own story. But let’s not get ahead of ourselves.This story started interesting with the MC trying to make it in the railway business which was interesting to read about how he navigated inventing and introducing new technology. Sure it’s a bit unrealistic to imagine some guy knowing all these technologies without some explanation, like he perfectly remembered his past life’s memories, but I left that slide. I shouldn’t have. As the story progressed, he started introducing tech that he shouldn’t even know how it works since it was outside his field yet he knows how they work and is active in their development. Now I am fine with trying to invent tech you aren’t familiar with but know the basic concepts for it, other stories have done this, but not as easy. And that’s one of the biggest gripes I have with this story. Everything is so easy for the MC, unrealistically easy. Just pour some weeks/month and do some lip service for a new revolutionary tech to be invented. The lip service is important because the MC is constantly giving a simple speech and for some reason the world around him eats it up, even his enemies act as what he says is how it is. Now the second but most consistent issue with this story, it’s inconsistency. The author forgets his own stories and what people/tech he has invented constantly. At one time there were submarines when the car hadn’t even been fully introduced in the world, or radio being a thing but then the MC “invented” it some tens of chapters later. And this is constant. Even later when the MC has a family, the names of the wife and child get mixed up at times. Now the third and most recent issue I have that is making me want to drop this. The MC becomes the president of the US and that’s when everything goes off the rails. The interest in the story was the building tech and business empire angle but now it’s constantly presidently stuff that is honestly borderline impossible. First this man has one of the biggest industrial conglomerate empires in this world’s version of the US. He is the military industrial complex, yet as a president he is being treated as if he is just some upstart and getting conspired against by people who should be beneath his power. Like they conspire to start wars yet the author forgot the MC OWNS! The company that has invented the tech that give the country its military advantage. how would it go if the MC decides to not go along with the war? Remember how I mentioned how everything comes easy to the MC? It’s worse later in the story, as the MC is facing a secret order and conspiracy but the MC just always magically gets the good results, like he randomly uncovers the name of the conspiracy without ever being stated how, or he can convince the public despite the media being against him. Which is stupid because I recall he invented the radio and TV and owns some of those media companies himself. How is he getting attacked by an industry he should honestly have the biggest pull on? Now the last issue, that connects to the previous point about the author forgetting things. The MC is a man from our world who died and went to the past. That’s how he has been able to “invent” things. However, even early on, the story seems to completely forget this fact. Despite some places having different names and people, this world is a copy of ours with honestly the same history. Yet the MC does not use his knowledge of future events at all or even point out he knows about it. He is about to face the First World War, which an educated man from the future should see coming from a mile away, yet he doesn’t act on it or even seems to know about it. Someone mentioned about the author using chatGPT to write and I may believe it. Unless this author is having multiple people write the story for him, there’s no reason he should be forgetting these fundamental aspects of his story. Totally destroyed a story with a nice premise. Thank you for reading my rant

This book is full of excitement and adventure. The dynamic of the world is so interesting and unique. I am genuinely so excited to see what the story leads to next and to experience more of this fantasy world.

It's a good start and the grammar isn't too bad. The chapters are a decent length and the ending of the first chapter does make you want to keep reading. It tends to Tell vs Show quite a bit, but that's easy to fix and should resolve as the author really gets into the heads/mannerisms of their characters.

From my point of view the story revolves around Tasha.However it’s kind of taking time like it’s so slow.But I’m enjoying it because it contains real content. Someone can absolutely relate to some of the events in the book also I’m not a fan of fantasy  this is my kind of story. I would want to read more of this story and I’m glad that it’s still ongoing.