I liked it, I'm actively rooting for Renee to escape or to pull some trick out and to escape. Though I don't think it terrible likely, But if Raphaela/Lucilia-fusion-thing wakes up that would be big enough for a diversion methinks.
8GaugeBrett said:
While I am happy for all the revelations in this chapter, all the talking got boring rather fast.
Agreed, I was waiting for someone to throw a punch or for Rubel to show off some Yoma implants or something along those lines. But talk they did, and fade; my interest did. The final few lines got my attention back. I think something nasty's going to happen to Rubel, he's trying to play too many sides.
I wouldn't mind cutting to Helen and Deneve sometime soon though.