metsujin said:
Interesting chapter, after a while I enjoyed a chapter, it was quite fun... the forced NaLu fanservice scene is meh... I mean I get Natsu is 'cold', and to heat up his body so he wouldn't die, the warmth of another person's skin is a good choice, but in the end of the day, its still fanservice. because he'll be fine... Why did I write that lmao. Nonetheless interesting chapter, hope the next ones will be the same.
Short review pointed out all the flaws that make this scene badly written.
There are a million ways to write the scene fanservice free and still provide a sense of threat for Natsu, while providing a "romantic" momment between the two protagonists.
It´s shoehorned and forced because all those other better options exist. The logic necessary to justify the scene is writing that´s mostly used in porn, for the delivery of, well pornography.