This story is amazing I love first person story’s keep up the good work just maybe all the I’s you can fix and use other words because it’s a bit repetitive but it’s really good

my (i don't know how much) shameless review, this story will full of plot holes because i want it that way.the story will be a bit long and feel boring for me, well im just sitting everywhere and types on the keyboard after all.writing quality, bad real bad because this will be my first ever serious novel, and fyi i don't really know grammar that well, at least i know how to talk using English am i right.character design, i have a lot of character idea in my head that i feel that this story will have a ONX PXECE type of character design.updating stability, unknown i still have life after all.world background, from the time i write this review, the world background is still on hold until the future arc of the story.so that's all, the only thing shameless about this review only because of the rating, so i tried my best to write as honest as i can

A very exciting novel! The events are enjoyable, and the writing style is smooth, making me eager to know what happens next. I highly recommend it!

I really like this story. It's amazing and I really do recommend it. I haven't been able stop reading it. It's characters and story plot are very well done. ❤️❤️❤️

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Book is alright,,, but just to slow for me… mc is decent not smart but got potential.. I didn’t get that far ahead cause chapter lock, for such a slow book where roughly 15 chapter is spent in just school first day, investing in this is gonna be rough.i felt no excitement it was just plain.. if u got money to spent and time to wait for the thousands of chapters this book got a cool future.. but its not for me..  Good luck author..

If there is any author that will give you comedy and deliver it so tastefully, its author Zehell. I’ve always been a big fan of her work. 1st chapter in and was hooked!Beautiful work! Hope to read more!

Good job author setting the world with good premise. I like the mystery and twist on going back in time aspect, skills and the world looks interesting as well. Grammar is definitely good and prose is easily digestible📚🥂

I am really enjoying this story so far. its_alan appears to pump out updates much faster than I can read them because I read pretty slow if I'm honest.There is a really interesting way the story is written where the dialogue of the characters feels more natural than many other stories I have read. They have a certain bond between them whether it is a heated exhange, or a loving exchange. There is a voice and accent even to a lot of these characters that I can hear in my head.The world even though it is an apocalyptic scene sounds like a paradise in the works with beaches and housing at the click of a button with a special system in place that is explained early on. More gets explained through each chapter.The crab Clancy is a very fun character premise and he seems adored by commenters. The story has a lot of promise and a lot of ways it can go. There are villains that pop up and great friendships made along the way. Mysteries, suspense, humor, romance, and perhaps a love triangle. Not sure yet.

This novel is great! It’s engaging, with a well-structured plot and a pace that keeps you interested. The development is steady, and each chapter offers just the right amount of intrigue. Definitely worth checking out if you want to read a story without the usual clichés of reincarnated protagonists!Well done, author—keep going! 👍✨

An inspiring tale of Cleiton, a 14-year-old from Brazil's favelas, chasing his dream to become a soccer legend. Hope he ends up at São Paulo FC, the greatest!

Magnificent ✨ Please keep on going! ✨✨✨✨