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could get you addicted in the first few chapters. nice work

Kaelith you Basta*d!!!... how dare you hurt her like that.

In my opinion, the story is great. The writing quality is pretty good, and the background is bleach, so that's an easy 5 stars. I dont think update stability is a reasonable rating mechanism, so that's being left at a 5. I'm a little on the fence about the character development in general. On one side, the mc is developing, but in a rather strange way. He had suddenly started zoning out during fights in a strange way, as if his life was over because the plot was changing. It's strange, but I'm giving it a break because I'm hoping it's very temporary. The other side characters are becoming a little too strong for my liking. Where they might have contested a lieutenant, they are now fighting captains. Overall, it throws the power scaling into the abyss in an attempt to make the side characters less... sidey. Unfortunately, it's too late to change that part, but I hope he tones it down. Otherwise, the story has been grand. Needless to say, the MCs' powers have a huge potential to be incredibly cool, and I hope the author delivers.

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"I'm not going to answer that until I hear her voice. What if you're actually a thief?"

He seems calm on the outside, but his thoughts are in a state of confusion and panic. The look on his eyes says that he lacks someone so important to him, and without that, someone, he might as well die. Except his self-defensive mechanism is preventing him from killing himself and repeatedly restoring him to the peak condition.

Pov MC

Their words varied but the result was the same, looking at Hana, her face still held on a gentle smile but within her head, she must be cursing me to death. The hands of her is shaking with anger, though she manage to conceal it, but it was me, her 'best friend' or should I say her stupi and blind follower in the past, knows her temper and character.