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dyoodle13Tx3
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could get you addicted in the first few chapters. nice work
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Here's shameless autor, off course I'm giving myself a high review. I can only say on thing guys. It's worth it so please support the book and let's read it together
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I just read your chapter, and although it's only one chapter, it's really good š
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Hi, I'm Kohi, the author of "Your Majesty, I'm Not Awakened!" (MINA)This is my first BL novel, and I hope that my lovely readers will enjoy the story. I love reading hunter, tower-climbing and dungeon stories, like Omniscient Reader, The S-Classes That I Raised, and Regression Instruction Manual, to name a few. So I thought, what if I write an actual BL Hunter story, not just a fujioshi bait of two handsome men? One with both romance and plot? So here goes my baby, MINA. I'm not that good a writer, and I will likely miss a preposition or verb tense here and there. I just hope y'all will give Ryujin and his beloved a chance. HAPPY READING! Cheers, my lovelies~
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The use of the system is amazing in this novel.The story seems to be a cliche in the start but it is quite unique and brilliant.
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Overall a pretty good story considering the common premise and the common copy and paste of this kind of genre. However the author actually does this differently, although the mc has a major advantage of ābeing two peopleā it is a reasonably a fair cheat while the mc still has to fit into the framework that everyone else does while trying to make the most of his advantages along with planning to the best of his ability but not out of what can be consider a normal human. As for characters, the characters although not perfect, that is what makes them good because they have that small spark of humanity that will allow future development. Now letās get into world background hasnāt been developed enough for me to give the green light or red light about it, which is good because if a story reveals to much background at once for no good reason the readers will feel bored and unable to get that sense of discovery along with the mc. Now onto advice for the author: 1. Donāt fall into the trap of my mc is perfect or he canāt make mistakes because that will annoy readers yes some readers may complain or leave but that wonāt be the majority, 2. Donāt be afraid to punish your mc for his mistakes, mistakes generally come with consequences, whether it is tripping because you werenāt paying attention to where you are walking, or generals losing a part of their army because they mispredicted the enemies moves, 3. Have a hint of randomness in your story something not even you can predict, some of the best stories have hints of randomness to them, you could even get a wheel with a bunch of random events that you want to happen but arenāt sure how to implement them then spin it every 10 or 20 chapters, and if the event can be fit in the story with the mcās current situation put it in then your mc has a random event that he will have to adapt to, but donāt try to force it because the. You will just be reducing the quality of the story rather than improve it. (Also I left everything vague so there will be pretty much no spoilers) anyway hope you all enjoy this story as much as I am and hope you all have a great day imma go back to reading
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Hi there, amazing author! I just finished reading your book, and I must say, itās fantastic! I wanted to reach out and share a few tips that could help boost the performance and visibility of your book even further
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Its good ..I like the plot, the importance in main charectors .. i guess the the author will develop the story in a good way .. not forgetting the plot
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It's not a real review. I'm just asking if this has Yuri or ntr before I get too invested
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Keep going on. Lovely novel with a very good FL character and equal ML character. Thank you Author that you make us enjoying so much your novel. š¤š¤š¤š¤š¤©š¤©š¤©
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This is so good to read and I can't even express in words
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I have enjoyed this story. Through the authors words I was able to imagine the development of Tupac . I would recommend if to anyone that wants to read about the authors idea of Tupac's biography. I don't know enough to say what is different from reality. Again, I enjoyed the story. However, i feel like I was brought here with a bait and switch tag "reborn". The main character does not seem to be aware that he is reborn so I don't understand why the tag has been used.
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