within the house

This is evidently a new writer, but the enthusiasm shown in this work is remarkabe. Each chapter is meant to capture the readers attention. Unlike other books i have read this one seeems to capture the normalcy of the human mind and relate on a personal level.

The pacing could need some work, and the genre should be magic realism (urban) 🤔putting the themes and realist settings. Otherwise, the novel is well written, it's just needs a little humor or dark element, to me🙃

Sooo... Where do I begin? (First-ever review) If you haven't begun to read it, then you should! Although still in its infancy stage, it holds a lot of potential.I assume you all were attracted by the idea of a non-human protagonist and had a look at the synopsis, so I doubt I need to explain what it is about.The writing quality: at the time I am writing this, I am at Chapter 31, which shifts between present and past tense, which may deter you guys, but trust me, the author is trying their best! Other than that, nothing big has been able to break my immersion.Stability of Updates: I believe that the author has released a chapter or two every single day and will rarely take a break from it.Now for the last three! Story development: The story itself is still in the early stages, so there isn't much to write about currently, so no perfect 5 stars!Character design: Currently, John (MC) is still somewhat of a cub/child, so he has no overall big designs, but his current design is pretty cool, in my opinion!World Background: Kind of the same for this character in that not much has been told to us about it, even though it is pretty cool so far. So, while the world is still in its early stages and can be moulded by its readers, I suggest you go read it and give some ideas to our beloved author!Overall! A 4.2 for me as of Chapter 31 (most likely a 5-star once the story progresses a little more!) I fully recommend it!

"Maybe he fought in the War of the Best or was freed from Impel Down" Nami suggests but none of them were sure as they pondered in silence.

The water's getting warm so you might as well swim

You'll never shine if you don't glow

"System, buy me the 'Gran Rey Cero.'"

               "Hmm, there's a small signal and something else but, I can barely detect it. Just, go through."