Werewolf: Battle of the Heart [BoyxBoy]

This is the author here. I came here to leave a shameless review on my own book and to also ask for guidance from all of you.I am trying to write a pretty decent book and because of the time I spent away from writing and reading, I am sure I made some glaring errors.please comment on the book, telling me where I went wrong and what I can do to make it better.

It is a very good read, I might say; it has fewer chapters by now, but the story flows smoothly with a great action-packed description that gives you great visuals (Especially the fight between Navyn and Ceaser).I do hope that during system displays the attributes and other descriptions will be spaced out for easier reading (That is why Writing Quality has 1 star less) Apart from that, the System is unique, better than most that I have seen, and I can see the author is cooking something amazing with it, which might surprise us.The overall story type wasn't new in Webnovel, but most of the time, it was the execution that truly made a good story, and this has a good execution to my taste. Even though I see that he was somewhat using screenplay and movie format in some of his scenes I didn't find it jarring to read or get confused (This is where we have shown where the Titan was with Jack and Naman and then we have flashed back on what happened before then we were back to the scene. Usually it won't come in that order)There was another scene, too, during Jack and Ceaser's fight, but to me, it add layers of good storytelling to a degree. Another thing that I want to add is the realistic situation and the sense of foreboding and helplessness other characters feel. It was a good display. I'm not a fan of too much death, but the fact Carol lost her child just after saving him with the nanny makes me think that the Apocalypse isn't joking around.But I'm more interested in Jack's character development. Will he be a generic arrogant system user who stream roll  everything with a grin or be a complex character that we will hate and love? Hopefully, it will be great.

This book give me a chance to escape  for my reality and just makes me feel like I’m  actually in the book. I just love it😘

Pretty good with the plot and other ideas which at first seem generic but have a unique twist? to them, genuinely enojoyed it and i am looking forward to seeing more from the author.Good luck.

But the meteor men beg to differ

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid