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Asura_Sovereign21
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ntww12
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Mrant is a great author, he creates good world building and likeable characters, check out this novel, i am sure you will enjoy it too
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Asura_Sovereign21 rated it Fruit of Life
May 13,2025
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novel look good 👍 look forward for more updates
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Asura_Sovereign21 rated it The World of Amron
May 13,2025
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This is a heartwarming fantasy book with a fast catching action magic packed tale with plenty of adventure element. It's title invokes of the beginning of a super heroes based sequel . A Must Read for fantasy and powers lovers.
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Asura_Sovereign21 rated it The Gods' Arena
May 13,2025
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Author, it's good to have you back 😁 Previously you wrote this novel under another name. It was going really well but suddenly you quit this novel. I hope this time you don't quit it and that's a request. If you quit it again, then ...
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Asura_Sovereign21 rated it Spinning The Wheels
May 13,2025
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The beginning of the novel is good. Your approach of making the introduction(chapter 0) philosophical is intriguing.As I read further, I found the build up to be good too, even though I thought some things were odd, but that didn't affect the quality and flow. The scenes are interesting and that seems to be your strongest point so far, like, you are very good at writing moments. The problem I had in the middle is how much of it was "filler". A decent bit of it was character information and skill information (system time) that didn't really move things ahead but rather slowed them down and broke my immersion.I can't say much about the character design since there's not much to go off of. Most of the beginning was action and it's in the most recent chapters that you started  showing his initial disposition. I guess we'll see...
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Author here. I know my opinion doesn't count when I'm the one who wrote the book but still, no one's stopping me😁.The world background is actually the real world, so I essentially have a good world background without having to work for it!Like the synopsis implies, the first 5 or so chapters are purely for building the character, basically a giving the readers information about his life and present situation  I don't want to bring any spoilers so I'll leave it at that.The book is a new concept, I think, so I'm basically walking blind here. But with your help, I think we could make this work.Thank you, and please read
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Asura_Sovereign21 rated it OC oneshots
May 12,2025
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It's very great and disruptive, iIreally love the pacing more than most
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BROOO THIS NOVEL MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD MANY TIMES LOL HAHAHAH I LOVE IT, KEEPT IT UP AUTHIR
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The introduction is great , But the pacing? Let’s just say it’s taking its sweet time, like a snail on a coffee break. Still, I’m curious to see where it’s heading, so I’m sticking around!
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i read this on my spare time. so far i am loving this book. must read. it's unique.
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Asura_Sovereign21 rated it Elysium of ecstasy
May 12,2025
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So far a great read. Enjoying the character development and progression of the main character without giving away too much of the future.
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Asura_Sovereign21 rated it BlackWolf Origin
May 12,2025
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THIS IS GOOD 💯 THE DEVELOPMENT OF DANIEL IS GOOD THINK IT HAS GOOD POTENTIAL
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