Love the writing style of this author. 5

First , I am putting my all my efforts into writing the novel , editing it , then translating it and editing it again . Therefore , I hope for your encouragement and interaction no matter how simple it may seem to you , it means a lot to me.The novel will be amazing and uniqueThe story is better then a lot of famous novel's stories and i am doing my best to make it logical and develop in correct wayI think i create a new type of novels when the MC reincarnate but 5 years before the appearance of my RPG gameMy novel will contain 3 parts every new one will be much bigger than the old oneThe firs part is the story in the real EarthThe second is in the game when we will have a world between fantazy and cultivation The third is when the humans travel to the new world or the game's worldWe will have more parts but it will came latterI will make a work similar to my favourite works with more than 3000 chapitres and i need your support and helpIf you are interested in being a caracter in my novel ore have any ideas feel free to contact me ire write it in the comments

Cracked Foundations is a dystopian novel exploring power struggles between the privileged Nobles and the oppressed Needies in a post-nuclear world. The protagonist, Keith Janes, begins questioning his society’s brutal traditions, leading to rebellion and mystery. The story blends class conflict, suspense, and dark world-building.

The story immediately grabs attention—it's an awesome read with a captivating writing style.The way the author seamlessly shifts between the narrator's perspective and the protagonist's view is impressive, making the storytelling engaging and immersive. The other characters are well-portrayed.The more I read, the more I crave—it's truly intriguing!It's an excellent read, my friend. Keep up the great work!

While a familiar start of betrayal and rebirth, the story and characters make this a fantastic and unique read. I love the world building, slowly filling in and expanding, not like some that Info dump. Each character feels like a real person with their own quirks. I'd highly recommend.

A creepy paranormal story. Samantha is sympathetic but truly terrifying!

Deep..........unusual........great....

(This is a place holder till I have time for a proper review)

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Wow,,,,You got me interested bro,,,,,nice,,,concept you got and I would love if you continued writing I mean,And it cultivation type mixed with fantasy probably,,,,good work keep it up....

Hi, Moe!I just found this story some days ago and i'm really enjoying it. I've read up to chapter 44.As a non english native speaker, i can't speak about the technical aspects of the narrative since my knowledge in that side of the english grammar is quite limited but i pretty much like the other points as the plot and characters developments, the worldbuilding, the characters interactions... Keep doing such a great job.

I had already read the first story and decided to give this re-release a chance. After reading 168 chapters, I noticed that this story had quite a lot of changes. 1- It doesn't make sense for a human who died and was in a sort of "limbo" as a soul to be able to use abilities and deceive Death itself.2- For someone who has an entire lifetime of experience and has just reincarnated, it doesn't make sense for his first decision to be seeking revenge because the previous owner of the body joined a tournament and died.3- How does he manage to use his martial arts skills in a body with no experience, muscle memory, or preparation? At this moment, he has the experience, memories, and theoretical knowledge from his previous life... It doesn't make sense for him to fight and defeat people more powerful than him currently.4- Why does someone with a lifetime of experience, knowledge, techniques, and life lessons get so drastically influenced by the current body even after so many chapters?!5- Again, how can someone with so much life experience attempt revenge/murder so poorly prepared and impulsive, to the point of not even worrying about properly planning for possible complications?6- After the national tournament ends, he suddenly decides to travel in search of his supposed mother, whom he neither knows nor has solid information about. Arriving at the city where he will board the boat/ship, he suddenly becomes a companion/adventure buddy with someone he just met and accepts any decision from this person, even knowing what happened with his father. Because of this, they are captured and sold as slaves. Again, how can someone with so much life experience be so dumb?!I'll stop here because there are too many things that don't make sense and are just thrown in our faces without any or almost any coherent explanation from the author. I would prefer the plot/story of the original book. [ Google Translator ]