The Shadows Of The Forgotten Realm

Author here. There are areas that could use refinement, particularly in pacing. I welcome any questions you have about the story and i hope you enjoy the read!

Knife is similar to Katana, but it is somewhat different. Katana is long, has a large arc, and the knife is relatively short and the arc is relatively small.

The first days both of them still wondered how they should address each other. Bynames or cuter nicknames. When was it okay to kiss? Should they sleep together every night from now on? How should they act in front of everyone else? Eventually, days passed and their and their confidence in each other grew exponentially.

Sora:let me see him just once!(do aegyo)

Yes, I see. Sorry, but are you a foreigner?

He raised an eyebrow at me. "Yes? What did you come here for?" The young Earl asked.

On the other side of the planet inside the Holy mountain of Karna just north of Torgoth lay Tiberius Son of the Emperor. Prince Tiberius is a young adult only half the size of his father Tiberium an Elder Dragon. Tiberius was Roughly 2400 years old and was considered young compared to his 4000 year old father. His uncle Duke Tandar, the Kings older brother who was too old for the throne Lived a little  further north in the Tashar Mountains. Tandar was once king but suffered a wound in battle against another powerful Red titan, He would have died if his younger brother had't saved him. These three are another royal class of dragons known as Planetary Dragons, although few in number are the most powerful dragon on Xelna.  Tiberius is a White dragon with some green spots and stripes on his body, there are also many Diamonds that make up his scales and give him a nice shine. Unlike their counterpart Red titans the planetary dragons liked to look nice and would tend to wash regularly.

Writing quality is decent and the author does a good job on updating it. The story development runs into coincidences that make it hard to believe becaus it’s so crazy comepared to the rest of the story. Characters develope fairly well and it needs more background to the surrounding world and what the culture is.