The Mad Black Knight's Power

Loved the story and the character design.Especially the start of the story, starting with a cliffhanger like that was a really good move.Really looking forward for the upcoming chapters!!Amazing work, Author!!

"I'm fine Gaspy… no need to worry" Koneko then gave a weak smile and returned to her thoughts as she continued looking out the window. Two people had been listening and watching the conversation between Gasper and Koneko and they had both seen that something was definitely troubling the small girl, those two being Rias and Gohan.

"Hahaha hello my fellow breatherin you may ask yourselves how I can speak well I was conscious for the last 3 years and learned a lot of things hahaha so this is Forst Demons so this is part so this is snow hahaha" John manically laughed trying to get into his role and surprisingly talked as he put his right leg on the cold, hard metal ground with a loud stomp gaining everyone attention

He walks over to my side. "That matter can wait, but miss, you must confide in me please! I will try my best to help you." Me starts to rub my back to comfort me.

"First off, I didn't realize I said that, I was trying not to, in fact. However, you're right, I did forget to do so. How could you tell?" (Tuare)

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This is a great read to be honest. Only issue is the writing format of the dialogue which I believe can be improved, but overall great book.

So far, I have greatly been enjoying this novel. The characters aren't your typical "smart" mc's that do the dumbest crap possible. Instead, they actually plan ahead and consider what they're doing. Any mistakes they make are usually because they are still immature children, or because of their limited worldview. They aren't arrogant, as they know there are likely people with more talent than them, while also not being overly humble, as they still easily destroy opponents when necessary. Their advantage in combat makes sense, since who the hell would be expecting a human to fight like a beast?My one singular gripe is that the worldbuilding seems kind of basic, and a lot of stuff that is introduced is just kind of abandoned, with no later mention.Asides from that, five stars in everything, I would absolutely recommend this to anyone trying to read a good Wuxia novel, then I'd solidly recommend this one.