The lost world's call

good novel, the storyline characters world building everything was well made keep up the good work.

I am the author. Feel free to ask me anything. You can follow me on Instagram @booksbylynnbyrne

Can i get a feedback please so iIcab change an upgrade it😁🥹

Hey Author, because you're new, how about taking notes of certain aspects to improve in and asking us about what should be improved on, so we support you more. Take the critic from Erezoth for example that may seem harsh, but if you truly listen to it and take your time off after The first Volume and improve on the story that way, it truly would turn out a banger with Volume 2 , so cheer up and take advice to improve, nobody's perfect from the start so I wish you all the best :] 👍

"It feels like there is commotion in this Island , I feel like there are other people on this Island, that can shake the ground" Martin continued

Was he mad? Oh there was little doubt about that after that display he left on the 6th floor that day, the overwhelming pressure and anger he let loose on the floor had been clear enough that he

"How is he?"

Rare