The King of the Old World

It’s time ……………………………………………………………………………… to read

Just basing my review from your novel I Can  Copy Curses so I assume this will be great also. Please continue that novel plss, I really love the story of Orion. And this too. So dont drop both.

Its hard to write this given I’ve been here since chapter 20, but I’m done. I’m not going to spoil the plot, but I am going to list the major problems. 1. Over the course of the novel the ‘system’ becomes an afterthought. It’s a common problem amongst novel’s that use a system with balance, and large bricks of text becoming harder to manage. It ends up getting updated once every hundred chapters. 2. Eiro becomes more, and more 1 dimensional as the story progresses. Without giving specifics Eiro loses his initial wrathful charm as it gets replaced with a more karen like anger. 3. Dice goes for way too much consistently causing random important plots to be dropped, and filler added. At chapter 600 3 giant plots have been seemingly forgotten that immediately come to mind. This compounds with the massive roster that leaves many characters thin. This all slowly ate at me for the last hundred chapters, and I’m dropping it now. Goodluck, hopefully Dice fixes this stuff so you can enjoy his work more than me.

He looked at his map and saw there was only another 30 assassins left, while there was about 30 or 40 green dots, which are most likely the Lu family. Lin Feng was about to go back out and kill some more assassins when his expression underneath his mask changed and he hurriedly used Inner Energy to protect his organs and crossed his arms in front of his chest.

"Yes, It's quite scary too." Shen spoke as he rubs the back of his head.

He wore the coat and pinned the rose on the left of his chest. After he did so, he opened the box, in it, was a golden flintlock.

Terbius Familia, the guardian of The Temple of Venus.

he had realized that the only way to cross that limit for him was to be at risk of death, to take full advantage of his body depended on it.