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GothChick
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- July 1,2024
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good
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glad it's back Christopher is father and best boy Emperor can be number 2!
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The premise of this story is wonderful as well as the idea behind it. Perhaps it's just me but for some reason the writing comes off awkwardly. For example 'he asked interrogatingly' or 'he said assertively'. You use phrases like that consistently. If a question is asked usually it's automatically in an interrogative tone since an interrogation is just an official year for the questioning that the police do. Basically, it becomes a bit redundant in that aspect. There are also other things you can use to describe besides those adverbs. For instance instead of saying 'he said assertively', a phrase like he stated in a tone that made it clear he was serious. It's longer but it fits in and provides imagery. I am honestly not trying to Lecture of put you down because I think it's amazing to pursue your goals and consistently put in effort. It's just that I personally believe that I'd be doing an injustice by not saying anything because I truly like the premise of the book. It is a skillful blend of both modern and ancient to me.
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I really like the world, the depth of the characters, and, overall, the writing style—it all comes together beautifully! 💓
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The alpha king is against homosexual in his pack but then he finds out that the moon goddess gave him a male mate... oh God , I love this , like the twist is already in chapter one. I fell in love with it before I went too far .❤❤❤
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Hey great author Have read your book and it's really amazing but I would like to share you some tips on how to grow your book performance
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just starting it and it good so far keep it up
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This book is good..nice write-upkeep it up...
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Now this is really interesting. author is there anyone in this novel who isn't evil. literally iam even suspecting his father true thoughts at this point.
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good book loved the story and characters and the names
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The story at first felt like it will go slow, but I actually found it not so after the first chapter. Thinking about all the other books I've read, it usually takes at least one chapter to start getting going. If you think about books who start hitting it off the first paragraph, they usually burn out quickly. I don't feel like this will.Very happen with how's it's turning out. I've read Anthony's other books from the past and he has become a better writer.God Bless you for your gift Anthony.
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Well, I'm the author of this novel so I might as well just give it five star! Very good novel, highly recommended! 😁
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