The Fragmented Chronicles: Echoes of the Forgotten Realm

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I'm up to chapter 28 and so far loving this. The FL is super sweet and the 3 ML's are all very detailed and interesting characters. I thought I liked the Commander but the Prince is winning me over - love the burn. Can't wait for more of the two of them. Keep going dear author! You'll get my one vote a day :)

I just realized I haven't done a review of the novel yet, so here it is. So far the story has been focusing on cultivation and getting stronger, which I do like, and he doesn't pull these random comebacks out of his a*s and feels a little more realistic than cultivation novels nowadays.The writing quality is good. 5/5 Chapter updates have been consistent; we are currently getting 2 a day (wish we got more lol). Now let's move on to the MC's character. From what I have seen, he is cold, calculating, greedy, isn't a b*tch, and is very ruthless and unforgiving over the smallest things. Let me give an example. After he finished the sect trial to join the sect, he was talking to the sect elders (I think they were I don't remember) on a mountain, and they said, Let's go test your talent, so they hopped on their flying swords and left the MC on the mountain instead of taking him with them. So now the MC has to climb down the cliff and travel through a forest with a bunch of beasts, and on the way, the MC was like, "Just you wait until I grow strong enough... I will make sure the three of you suffer a fate worse than death." Now let's talk about the romance While I have been told by the author that there will be a harem, we haven't seen much of it because at the moment MC is in the mindset that he can't form any sort of romantic relationship because he needs to get stronger and doesn't have time to spend on romance. Oh, and the author has said that there will be no yuri, just a quick FYI.Now, as for world-building, so far it's pretty good. I won't go into much detail but just trust me on this. All in all, I would recommend

"He is still around. He is now one of our most dangerous enemies... one of the `Lords´. At the last state, I think he is currently calling himself Faust by what I have heard.

"I don tire for the game jor" Ikenna refilled his glass. He had gotten back from work just a few hours ago and still wore his corporate suit.

Sneaking my way out of the orphanage and into the forest at high speeds I teleport to my litch is I appear in a fog covered forest with what I can see through with my all seeing eyes I notice my skeletons surrounding the same group of men but with an extra female in the group.

"What's going on, wasn't I just sitting there a second ago?"