The Extra’s Detour

It’s a good story, and the English is really good. The only thing that had me confused was that I thought it was a Soul Land fan fiction at first because of a similar title and similar terms used in the story, but I now believe they are just similar and not the same.

Everything is excellently thought of and writtenwell done

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Only shooting stars break the mold

Madam Lin moved away and reached for some bandages which she used to wrap around Yu Yan's bruised and battered arms. Once Madam Lin had finished treating her arm, Yu Yan crawled over to Yu Xiao and sobbed into the night. She prayed that everything would be alright. This may seem over exaggerated but with a weak and fragile body like Yu Xiao even the slightest touch could cause death.

"I am on the second honors list sis! See? Your sister is a good student so you don't have to worry about me." Claude proudly stated.

the only reason I have not rated this novel a full five is because of the stability of updates please give us more chappppppppteerrrrrrrrrrrsssssssss I love your story

"You weren't. It was a test and you passed." He explained as he reached into his pocket and pulled out a handful of bills. He thought it was about five grand, but he didn't really count. "Buy something nice for yourself. And keep this to yourself. I don't want you to mention this phone to anyone, understood?"