The Blue Lightning

i really like the novel's concept ...the story is very  entertaining  well a little bit frustrating when the mc is been mocked or bullied but I also like the mc character calm and calculative and am really excited about the future plot will he merge with a talented character who had never appeared in the novel or a hidden villain .......am very curious is about the AUTHOR did he give Alden the cheat system or is the system an anomaly that author didn't notice or  the author sent Alden to suffer without any system or a good ability ...............or was Sammy even the main character we all know every main character has to be different than all other characters he has to special in someway or another  what if he was the main villain after he was consumed by the heart Demon I don't know but am really really really excited for the future chapters

I love the enthusiasm. I love the main character the plot the theme as well as the dynamic perfect setting the stage, especially in the world the MC find himself and great job. Can’t wait to read more.

I really enjoyed the story; it was very captivating, especially with the pain of betrayal and the development towards improvement. I liked it, and I also hope to see the sequel. I would also like to hear your opinion on my novel The Mages of the Zodiac.

She was already down stairs, in front of the entrance door band, the only person she has seen was some female maid, and a old man looking for a bathroom.

"WHAT?! the _____ forest?! How did you end up in there? And how did you survive, even if I personally went, I would still be gravely injured." Yi Zheng's father shouted. "Well, I was beaten up by Ye Tai and his servants before they threw me down the cliff. I then had a dream about an old man with a white beard who taught me some techniques which let me survive." Yi Zheng said

Bulan, " Di boutique."

But his shout is not the one bothering me right now, its his half naked body and wet messy hair, i can also smell those after bath soap.  I can't imagine that a person can be hot and sexy at the same time, i can't even take away my eyes on those 6 pack abs it makes me want to touch it.

As we walked through the crowds and got closer to our destination which was in the center of the downtown area, the police presence increased and the crowds lessened.