The Alpha's Banshee

It's certainly very well written, with a nicely established world background. There are a few grammatical errors, but the meaning gets across well enough. The proceedings are interesting, with a sustained tension, and the schemes and machinations involved are fun to read.I personally liked how a seemingly desperate situation was gradually overturned, all due to the efforts of the protagonist. The trials were also constructed well, making them seem like an important event, rather than a random examination that could have been covered in a chapter or two, as most hunter exams in novels tend to be. So many chapters spent covering hunter exams should normally be a negative, but in this case, it is quite the opposite.However, the character designs could have been handled better. For some reason, the author chooses to give sexual undertones to every interaction the protagonist has with a woman. They are always flirtatious in nature, with the protagonist reciprocating to a certain extent. Emotional infidelity is a complex topic, but I'm sure most would agree when I say that it's not fair to his wife. The male characters introduced are almost always either eccentric and mysterious, or simply irritating in his perception. It is a repetitive setup in this sense.This work hasn't been updated in a while, so I'm not sure whether it'll be continued, but the available chapters finished on a real high note. It undeniably arouses my curiosity, and I've been left with the feeling of wanting more.

The first few chapters are a bit slow and highly descriptive, then ‘hula’ the pace goes up and then we suddenly have fast-paced chapters with lots of new characters and events unfolding which is a lot to digest in the short time which feels better in middle of novel rather than the beginning. I feel the sentences are a bit overly descriptive which feels kinda long and a bit boring when reading it. It definitely has some funny elements to it which is good. It might be just me but I feel some words like *APPEAR*, *GLOW*, *GLARE* and *MERGE* appeared a bit awkward. It felt like the world development and side character are overly prioritized than the main character as I found we get the mention of mc only after a few chapters. Still, you can see that the author has done a lot of research to include the gods of many different regions trying to blend them into one world. Overall, this novel has good potential but needs a bit of improvement.

This looks like a cool story can't wait to see more.

"On it." Tony answered as he performed an evasive maneuver around several blasts of energy, "Just…give me a sec."

And all that glitters is gold

After fighting through a couple of enemy soldiers, we were close but the closer we got, the more ferocious the soldiers were. They were really trying to keep us from advancing. I also noticed that most of the enemy soldiers were scouts and shocktroopers so they didn't really have a full arsenal in this attack which suggests that this one was hastily made.

APPEARANCE: Koga is a 188cm tall, slim, yet mascular man. He  has black, buzz cut hair, and tanned skin. He wears the standard Marine Uniform, hat, and a Marine cloak on his back.

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