Well the writer is new and he is trying...so hope to more ........progress.This book is an intriguing mix of ideas, weaving together themes of growth, conflict, and self-discovery. The author’s writing style is good , with room for improvement , and leaves room for interpretation. While the pacing varies, certain moments are truly gripping, making it hard to put down. The characters feel alright, though some aspects of their development may leave readers wanting more.Over all this book is worth a shot.

If you are a lover of romans, possessiveness, obsession for love, then this novel is for you.

Author please mass release 🥲 see how your readers were demanding it....

I hope that you like my novel. It is my first novel in which I put my all and really hope it lives up to my expectations

my own review for my novel, not bad tho, like it add it to library!.

The protagonist has a strong, relatable voice, making even the simplest moments entertaining. The setup feels fresh, blending modern struggles with an intriguing mystery that leaves you wanting more.The writing style is witty and immersive, with a perfect balance of humor and intrigue. While the pacing could be a bit tighter, it’s a strong opening that sets the stage for something unique. Definitely worth checking out!⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5/5)

This is my first time to read a website novel and I hope I would relate on the characters lives.

Its a fun story, but the system ruins it. He's too reliant on the system as it gives him everything he needs and he constantly follows its suggestions. It tells him what formations they should use, however to play, what players to invest in and so on. It really feels dull since the protagonist could be anyone who follows the systems advice blindly.

Really good novel. slow paced and the girls has start of pretty good. This novel has a lot of potential............Good luck author with your WSA

I've got no words. ... .. just kidding I've got a lot to sayI want this as a movie .praying to all deities existing that this becomes a movie😭😭

Early review here. Looking at the prologue, the tone seemed quite dark. Fans of those types of stories would like this. Grammar is quite fine with only minor issues, though some words are somewhat hard to understand. Still very early, however, hope the author will improve as the chapters progress more. Keep it up!

Very interested in the worldbuilding and who/what we will meet as time goes on.Enjoying the ride so far and looking forward to where it goes next.Also this image sums up my feelings