Species Conflicts: Will I Stand with Humans or My New Species?

Não sei por quê não continuou com a versão em inglês; poderia ter trazido mais público, mas isso não muda o fato de que essa obra é maravilhosa. Esse cara sabe criar personagens cativantes, e a história está muito boa até o momento em que li (que seria 22cap quando estava ingles). A leitura é muito gostosa, e quando acaba, até fica triste.

This first chapter of has grabbed my attention from the very first page. The vibrant descriptions of the Dragons Festival and the diverse races of Romero create a rich and immersive world that I'm already eager to explore further.  The sudden, violent eruption of the Voidrifts is a brilliant way to shatter the initial peace and introduce the central conflict. Jorn's confusion and disorientation as he grapples with his new reality are palpable, making him an instantly relatable character.  The mystery surrounding his reincarnation and the nature of his chaotic power, the "chaos flame," is incredibly compelling.  The author does a great job of balancing world-building with action, keeping the reader engaged without overwhelming them with information.  The encounter with the Elves, though brief, adds a layer of complexity and hints at the dangers lurking beneath the surface of this seemingly peaceful world. The pacing is excellent, with the tension steadily building towards the explosive climax where Jorn unleashes his power. The writing style is engaging and evocative, painting a vivid picture of Romero and its inhabitants.  The chapter ends on a fantastic cliffhanger, leaving me desperate to know what happens next. I'm particularly interested in seeing how Jorn will learn to control his unpredictable power and how he will navigate the treacherous political landscape of Romero while facing the threat of the ever-expanding Voidrifts.  I'm definitely hooked and can't wait to read more!

It's good. Has Potential but I hope the author will not axe this. The pacing is good. Not slow, not fast either. The world building could be improved.

Speed up the second part—this novel is incredible, and I can't wait to see where it goes. Highly recommended, and I've only read three chapters.

Hmmm...Based on the first chapter alone:Apocalypse, reborn, and FL with a portable space that can store things and grow food—very similar to the apocalypse novel written by ColorfulAutumnWind.

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how should I do ? in this present situation

"I *sniff don't want *sniff to die"