Space travel:Crossing to an otherworldly continent

now I gave it a try listening to the chapters to where you can check it out it's extremely long winded it's generic storyline that you see in a lot of other stories I'm not saying don't check it out you may like it but I don't see why we have whole chapters on what everybody in the area is thinking about this and that it's ridiculous considering we're having to pay for these chapters on these books you figure they'd have a little more to do with this actual storyline

i can't wait 🥰 to see the end of this love between Daniel and Ava

Saddly I have to rate this novel low.There are jus 2 things that are wrong:1st. Author should put yuri/girls love in tags as he gain readers that does not now about it, like me. Yuri is just not my cup of tea.2nd. And more important.Autor has no idea what dominatrix means, probably not even bdsm is. Here I don't see any power exchange (maybe in case of 1 girl who is a masochist) only abuse. I am not sure if Autor did good research about this or even any. Not everything on the Internet is true. I've read this story till ch 60+ and what I found is brainwashing, abuse slave trading and training, more abuse and what rly pissed me of what torture...What is the most important in domination relationship is willingly giving someone power over him/herself. Here she just takes is for herself. So what I recomd doing if I were in Autor place:1. Delete story (this is extreme so don't do it unless the story is beyond saving which is not true)2. Change title as main character is not dominatrix but slave trainer probably with daddy issue looking how she treat males (abuse/sissification).3 edit story after doing research about proper bdsm relationships not only about pain and humiliation.I would choose 3rd option as it would enrich your knowlage for your future works. So Autor Cheer up and start studying. You can't just write what you want without knowing what you write.Woow it was rly long.

Light sighed. "Well Dark, what game do you want to play."

Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me

You'll never shine if you don't glow

"How could it be a cow, how can there be a cow in the sea!"

The guards were startled for a second before they ran in pursuit, but the chaos made their movement slower.