Sovereign Of Nothing

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

This story is nearly below average in everything. The grammar is abysmal, the characters aren't fleshed out ( but theirs only 25 as im currently writing this review, so it may change), and everything else seems *******ish. And listen guy, it's okay if you want to include dark themes like r@pe into your story but it has to make sense. Why after only 30 minutes of an apocalypse is rape already happening? Literally everyone would  be trying to procure a safe haven and some supplies, nobody would even have the feckin time.The character interactions are cringy and the MC is already acting like an edge boi. Slow your roll man, take a deep breath and replan your story.

own level has a extraordinary potential, however to unlock the potential

"Hmm, yes?" The plum colored troll nodded. "Of course, after such a life changing ordeal."

Still waiting for the next chapter😊

Zack: "Warren, you have contributed a lot to the village. I don't know what to reward you with, so I will allow you to enter the village's treasury and pick three things you want. Tomorrow I will accompany you there. "

Tuminhin s'ya sa'kin saka tinapik ang upuan sa tabi n'ya. Parang sinasabi n'yang umupo ako doon kaya 'yun naman ang ginawa ko.

I sighed then looked at his face again.