Rural Ace

It is a really nice story with good pacing. I like that the regular civilian life interaction, something which most world war stories do not show. It adds a lot of value to the story. As for the main character himself, he is well thought out, smart and confident but not so confident that he comes across as cocky to the reader. I hope he himself is being set up for some character development later in the story. As for right now, I home that we can get a more detailed scene setting, they are good but I think it can be more detailed.

It’s really good and if you keep up a fast paced story I see potential

Hex The Last Heir of the Hex Clan, Demon Hunter of the Cursed FlameCharacter Overview• Name: Hex• Title: The Cursed Scribe of Fate, Last Heir of the Hex Clan• Alias: The Talisman Warlock, The Sealed One, The Inkborn Exorcist• Affiliation: Hex Clan (Ancient Demon Hunter Clan)

I don't want to be biased so I'll be awaiting new chapters before dropping a full review. But so far?... AMAZING! I can't wait to read more. 🤭 If you're reading this and haven't added to your library yet, what are you waiting for?

Absolutely hooked! The mysterious and eerie atmosphere is captivating, and your descriptions bring everything to life so vividly. Can't wait to see where the story goes

Big Tree fell to his knees as he held his crushed hand up. He looked at his fingers, which were all distorted and twisted the wrong way. "Ah, ah, ah!!!"

I debated with myself. It sound like a good deal, but would i really be able to survive this for god knows how long? Can i control my self from not falling in love with the king of heartbreaking? I sighed and gulped down another shot of teqiula. I let the adrenaline run through my veins while i came to my final dicesion. YOLO chica...

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