Reborn as a Dove: Time To Evolve!

This book is the first book published by atalkingjar and that alone is enough.

its like ai generated story and i think it has to be more improved. but its not  that bad id give it a solid 5/10, it looks like the author is new so im not complaining that much

Slap!

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me

"I'll be right back"

"There are evil creatures in that place," She mumbles and wonders if they are eviler than Mogrok.

"You failed, Kyuubi! I'm going to kill you now, no hard feelings!" Mizuki said while laughing as he swung a kunai at Naruto. Naruto closed his eyes and couldn't resist a smirk. "Checkmate Mizuki-teme! Now, Ashe!" Naruto ordered. Iruka and Mizuki gasped as a teenage girl dropped to the ground. Everything about this girl screamed, cold. Not the emotion, but the literal feeling. The flames of hell behind Mizuki from Annie and the cold front of Ashe in front of him. Her blue and gold hood, cape, battle skirt, and shirt had Mizuki glued, but the thing that gave her away was the solid ice bow in her hands along with five frozen ice arrow. Ashe narrowed her eyes with a solid glare as her hands tightened around her bow. She pulled the string.