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DarjaRenen
- Joined
- July 1,2024
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Author going crazy.........Amazing fantasies. Its like bro knows what to doKeep it up ur doing an amazing jobI really recommend everyone to read it
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This story was engaging and readable , Good character development.I recommend this book 🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞
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i really hooked on this so far hope you don't drop.also is there a discord for pictures and chats.also i prefer it as a harem and R18.keep up the good work
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Hey guys 👋 Author here again! This will be the Q&A thread. Feel free to ask any questions, share corrections, or offer constructive criticism about my book here.I’d really appreciate your feedback.
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(Updated review chp 18) It’s so good! The book is so good! Hundred percent recommended. Just give it a shot like I did
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it's not bad.Slightly improve on your writing but other than that it has potential
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You see, I am 13 years old, and i singlely write and edit my book, thereby i can't promise a daily release.But i can guarantee 3 chapters in a week.I give my book 5 stars rating to motivate myself to keep pushing.
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Story is Really Intresting, You will be hooked by Mc Next Move.Story is predictable and unpredictable at the same time.Just need to Improve a little, i mean really little it will become a masterpiece
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After reading all available chaps, i have to say that while i’m interested, i don’t feel like following the Mc’s journey with such a starting point. It gives off the feeling of a long journey of powerlessness just to achieve some small things through tricks or borrowed hands.Mc starts his journey literally disabled, and so far, he doesn’t inspire any confidence. Priests and support classes are never meant to be main characters after all, they’re only meant to help others shine from behind, which goes in line with Mc’s advantages.Will let it stack and see how it develops from others’ reviews, but not gonna follow it on the daily.
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The story has an interesting premise, though it leans on a somewhat cliché trope. That said, it still manages to maintain a unique charm. I've read the first ten chapters so far, and I have mixed feelings. While it's intriguing, it also feels a bit confusing at this stage, with some soft info-dumping. However, I’m still curious to see how it develops.
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For the story, it is quite nice, but still, I don't know what the story is about. With no synopsis and a simple cover, it was a bit hard to know what kind of story it is.
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please rate it. I need to know whether it's good or not. please leave review. Both good or bad 🥺😭😭
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