My Boss's And I's Affair (ManxBoy)

I love everything so far about the story I like how the author choose words well and how each of his characters are when reading is like I’m interacting with the story itself.

The story is interesting and has potential... I'm very intrigued by how the Hunter System would be as the story moves forward... However, the concept of the system itself needs a bit of background or introduction for readers who are not familiar and only starting to read system novels like me... Also, your book has so much dialogue, at least 75% I think. It kind of looks like a movie script or a manga / comic... It's not bad but when I try writing like that, I get a harsh rejection from my editor... "remember that you're writing a book not a script"... those are Webnovel's words from writing guidelines.

you should all definitely read this, absolutely great if I do say so myself

Cursing as several Ultron Sentries managed to enter the building he was perched on, Hawkeye spoke into the com, "I'm gonna do some house cleaning."

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

      She's really greatful that she was able to have the priviledge to study in a prestigious university. So she always study hard and make sure she will not be removed from the highschool scholarship program of the said university. Everything seems to be running smoothly in her life. She thought it will not end anymore.. She thought that even though she's not with her biological family, She's still considered lucky for all the blessings she is receiving. She has contact with her family anyway. Fortunately, Cellphone is now a thing in their generation. So she can always talk to her sister and her other siblings and mother, There are also times that her mom, Catalina, would visit her with her sister Margaux and chat with her the wholeday and when its time for them to go, she made sure she always gave her mom her savings from her hidden stuff toys pocket. She keeps all the money her adoptive parents give her for school meal and doesn't spend it so she can make sure she has something to give her family.

Suddenly, a player walked towards him and amiably smiled.

At this point you turned your head, your sharp gaze piercing at them as they stiffened and tried escaping the classroom quickly