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ntww12
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absolutely mind-blowing and captivating novel, Author🔥
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phoenix8888 rated it Echoes of the Mindstream
May 14,2025
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Kata kata motivator ni bos Bill gatesAnda hanya perlu bekerja lebih keras. Nyatanya. (Ibunya duduk sebagai dewan direksi IBM corporation yang memberikannya akses) Jeff besosAnda harus memiliki keinginan besar untuk memiliki uang nyatanya (ibunya memberikan modal sebesar 300rb usd) Warren buffed Anda harus membuat diri termotivasi semaksimal mungkin nyatanya (ayahnya adalah seoarang anggota kongres di amerika serikat dan memiliki sebuah perusahaan investasi) Elon muskAnda harus mendedikasi seluruh waktu anda untuk bekerja. Nyatanya (ayahnya memiliki tambang berlian di afrika)
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This book is everything... Great story, good character development . If you are still on the cross roads deciding if you should add this book to your library the answer is YES ASAP.. Great work author
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I-This is the first review I've ever written but I had to write one for this book. It's not an exaggeration to say this is one of the worst books I have read in a long time. I liked the concept but the execution wasn't absolutely gutter trash. Overall, it's a very basic book with noticeable plot holes that experienced writers wouldn't leave, it also has very one-dimensional characters who just seem to follow a set of shallow rules to react to different situations. The plot progression and world-building don't flow well and are very unnatural, and what's even more unnatural, to me at least, is the character interactions, I have literally cringed at some of themI think it's a readable book if you're just starting out on reading web novels, but if you have any semblance of standards for these types of books or if you have read anything that's actually average in quality or above, then I would advise you to stay away from this. I hope this helps.
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I really hope this wont get dropped.Its really good, i'm 32 chapters in and i got sad there isn't any more updates.For people on the fence i would say give it 3 chapters that's all it took for me to breeze all available chapters without even noticing the time and that is a great sign.
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I'm loving the storyline. Looking forward to the next chapter
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Dear humble readers, Trust you're all fending well enough for yourselves, dear frirends. The purpose of this brief letter is to remind you that your options are extremely solicited, and I hope that you bring them on without holding back. Trust me, every form of compliment and criticism are highly regarded. Yours, Gazelle.
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This book has a good concept. the book is well written and has very few mistakes in the chapters.But.the writer of this book is missing some key points.1. The MC is wat to whiny and timid throughout most of the book, and only man's up when he's being shot at.2. the system issues rewards for completing missions, but the writer never goes back and explains them, and the main character doesn't use them and seems to forget about them.3. The whole Lord of the Rings arc is bordering on plagiarism. I feel this concept has great potential. more creativity and imagination are needed for this type of concept.
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I am already getting the vibe of mystery and adventure in the very first chapter. I love how you clearly show your characters as well.Delivery more of your masterpiece without holding back.
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phoenix8888 rated it The Beast of Infermity
May 10,2025
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20 chapters have been published. There are still few chapters to comment on. I can only say what I like. Thanks to the author!
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The story is interesting and has potential... I'm very intrigued by how the Hunter System would be as the story moves forward... However, the concept of the system itself needs a bit of background or introduction for readers who are not familiar and only starting to read system novels like me... Also, your book has so much dialogue, at least 75% I think. It kind of looks like a movie script or a manga / comic... It's not bad but when I try writing like that, I get a harsh rejection from my editor... "remember that you're writing a book not a script"... those are Webnovel's words from writing guidelines.
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This is a great story. I can't stop my self giving it a five star review Quite remarkable as the story telling and the back ground is well designed.Plus, the writing style is quite simple and goes in a good flow. Great book and will surely enjoy it
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