My Adventures as Lake

Hi there, amazing author! I just finished reading your book, and I must say, it’s fantastic! I wanted to reach out and share a few tips that could help boost the performance and visibility of your book even further

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Pretty good not gonna lie. Hope the author keeps up the good work. Wish you the best author

I'll just skip the positive and get to the point.There point in the plot that are repetitive which could get quite boring, it's like some of the chapters have half of its contents, give or take, basically describing the same thing over and over again. Fight scenes are also not very descriptive imo.Some phrases are also over used like pinching the bridge of the nose or rubbing the temple.As for the male, while amusing, can sometimes be cringey and annoying. I feel like there's no development with his personality. But perhaps that's point to highlight his mischievous nature. But to me it just gets tiring; it was fun at the start. I would to see him get serious more often.

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