Misunderstood Extra in a Twisted Tale

How should I put it? In terms of writing, it’s quite excellent. The setting and themes are well thought out, and the character designs are also strong. While it might not bring every character to life, at least the Sword Pavilion Master, the Eldest Senior Sister, and the bearded guy are quite vividly portrayed. However, the logical flow of the plot is a bit harder to evaluate.In the early stages, the protagonist’s various experiences—like the protective charm saving his life or the thunder talisman blowing up the wolf demon—could have been better understood if he had just put a little more thought into it. Even if he didn’t fully grasp the situation, he could have at least had some clues, and with a bit more time, he might have figured it out. Even outsiders, upon first meeting the protagonist, could piece together the cause and effect of events within a short time. As someone who holds a cheat ability, he keeps thinking he’s some kind of “tumor superman.” But it seems his mind might be a bit off—if we categorize him as intellectually challenged, then his mindless behavior isn’t entirely incomprehensible. Additionally, the transition from the protagonist’s ignorance to understanding the truth of the events isn’t handled very well.

mc is only gonna achieves anything cause he is the mc.bloody idiots we get as mcs this guy is high tier stupid.apart from that seems good

This continued until Max was around 3 years old and his intelligence had increased and was shown as he would walk about the house doing mathematical equations he found in books thrown around the rooms. He would do so quietly though so Conalds couldn't hear him. The older he had grown, the more Conalds had taken to verbally abusing him on a daily basis. The shouting had only grown in time and it even seemed that sometimes he would get to the point of nearly hitting the poor young boy.

That's the way I like it and I never get bored

Others around had noticed and begun to get wary, especially Sirzechs who looked on shocked at the power. Lightning cackled until a sharp arrow like shape shot from the skies with a trail of orange and red sparks. The shape instantly shot on top of the unsuspecting Lord Phenex as it imploded with his conjured fireball causing a small explosion to resonate capturing a few unfortunate devils in the surroundings.

It took a couple of long silent minutes before we reached floor 102. And all along I was wondering why there wasn't one person from all 102 floors who wanted to use the lift. Not one. the door opened and I was expecting to walk into a corridor before entering his room. Instead, I walked straight into his room or should I say house. It was a room that took up all of floor 102. Right then, I realised this was a private house just for him and the lift must have also been a private lift just for him, that's why no one appeared to get inside of it.

I was preparing myself to propose once again. It's my only assurance that she's for me; that she's my happy ending.

"Hey Iruka, this is his third time taking a test. He technically did create a clone, we could let him pass, right?" the other instructor asked Iruka.